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FOUR SILHOUETTES AND THE CARDBOARD GRID

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Four furry silhouettes, whiskers twitching, huddle around a cardboard grid~ Four acorn tokens clatter on the board. Dew-damp grass stains the Baltic Avenue deed. A whiskered snout nudges Community Chest~ Winter stores secured beneath oak bark. Four paws grip the dice cup tight and shake. Electric Avenue mortgaged for one nut. Tail-flicks trace railroads, Park Place dreams Shatter as a crow steals the top hat piece. Four bushy strategists stare at Free Parking. Rain begins its raid on Marvin Gardens. The dice roll forgotten, they scatter skyward~ Squirrelopoly unfinished beneath gathering clouds.
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Winter Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 7:04 PM
Wow, what a creative and beautiful way of writing this poem is ! Your imagination is indeed so admirable :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:42 PM
wow, thank you, Anne. Appreciate you and your visit
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 6:59 PM
One's recall, entertain others in generous memories of a bygone era for the many whose lives are gone apart from ties of old, and now are far and few in between whose presence are resurrected with a smile and a board game to boot. A Fave.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:42 PM
thanks for your delightful comments, William. Humbly grateful for your fave.
Jones Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 6:57 PM
What a great imagination you have and it makes reading you fun!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:41 PM
thanks, Karen...you're most kind
Godwin Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 1:00 PM
This is an adorable, imaginative and good time write. Love it. Thank you for your well wishes on Andrea's blog. I can now place fingers on correct keys, push keys and coherently type just not for very long but each day I know I'll be able to longer and longer. Again, thank you for your kindness, it means a lot to me. CayCay
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:41 PM
I'm so grateful that you're getting better....recovery just takes time and patience, hugs and blessings, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 8:22 AM
Squirrelopoly looks like a lot of fun especially with these delightful characters. lol
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:40 PM
thanks for your delightful comments
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