Four Flowered Fields

happy yellow daffodils nodding in the summer breeze are greeting each passerby with fragrant delight underneath an azure sky butterflies and hummingbirds complete the perfect picture of lavender fields rows of tulips form an arch arranged by color beneath a bright cloudless Holland sky. . . a rainbow of blooms in a crimson sky, sun sinks into an ocean of grass - wave upon wave of poppies splendidly surging Written 11/18/12
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Inman Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 7:17 PM
A floral delight Andrea.
A  Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 2:11 PM
A nice winning poem~LUV*SKAT
Phoenix Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 10:34 PM
lovely
A   Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 10:02 PM
ANDREA, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD
Mandani Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 3:45 PM
You painted a picture with words. Like it.
Gorelick Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 12:21 AM
Oh, fields of flowers..lovely. congrats. BG.. Hope all is well with you..dont get by here much but am going to try to do better. BG
Gasun Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 9:48 AM
My big congratulations with big hugs on your super win my dear Andrea! Good night. I'll come back tom. Take care and good luck always! love much, Leonora
Roberts Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 10:43 PM
Well done Andrea ....Seren
Johnson Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 9:24 PM
Lovely picture of early spring here in pacific Northwest also. congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
Poet Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 6:30 PM
Amazing imagery here in this Dodoitsu Andrea!Congrats on the win.
Haick Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 2:41 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic win, Andrea! Beautiful images! Love, Annalise
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 1:16 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot Andy love xx
May Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 7:49 PM
beautiful poem Andrea....congrats on your win....hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 6:37 PM
Simply Lovely, I see a win in your future,( providing the World doesn't end before the contest ha ha.)
Babcock Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 8:52 AM
Love flowers and love your poem Andrea. love phyl
Dome Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 3:32 AM
Wow Andrea, this is just beautiful, Loved the visuals. I wrote a poem very simillar. well done. warm best wishes. Pete.
Guzzi Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 9:37 AM
Oh you make me long for spring naughty woman LOL Light & Love
Mac Donald Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 9:43 AM
Oh, I love flowers, Andrea!! I had never planted tulips, but my neighbour's always reach up to embrace Spring. I can smell the lavender! A write to feed the senses! Splendid imagery.:) There'd been a field beside my parent's home with catnip growing there..(hint hint:) Hope you'll have a great weekend! Love, Mikki
Ober Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 10:46 AM
Oh, wow, this is really great. The imagery is amazing - I especially love the last stanza. I can picture it so well in my mind! This will definitely rank at the top in Russell's contest!
Chircop Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 12:29 AM
Now you've sent me to dreamland with this beauty dear.. I'm wishing i was there surrounded by all those tulips.. :)
Anish Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 9:19 AM
Beautiful words! Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Gasun Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 5:31 AM
Excellent poem my dear friend Andrea! I love it so much and the form. How I wish I can write a dodoitsu someday.A winner for sure! Thank you for sharing and good luck always! love, LG
Haick Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 6:11 PM
Well done! Thanks for painting these four lovely pictures. Very best wishes for a win in Russell Sivey's, "Natural Dodoitsu" Poetry Contest, Andrea. Happy Thanksgiving! Annalise
Horne Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 2:01 PM
wow, I just love these, Andrea - a sure winner in Russell's contest
Johnson Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 1:06 PM
Pretty little pastel words to brighten up my day. I thank you for them very much, that's all I have to say. :)
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