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Four Cafes

Four Cafes Winter mists swirl up from puddles on the cobblestones blurring the names of the four cafes facing the narrow boulevard. Townspeople and visitors walk briskly with their heads down, collars up, against January’s invading chill. From my apartment window I gaze hypnotized as people scurry through invading night like fallen leaves. Madeleine and her small son, in a shopworn cap, wait outside darkened How Wheat It Is for day old bread. Breakfast. Light from the bistro next door, scattered through the raindrops, makes prisms. A couple, identities disguised by distance, celebrate new love over chardonnay in bright blue like a rain painting reflecting on the street. Old Charles slowly pushes open the heavy doors of Four Seasons Café, white paper box, leftovers for lunch in his apartment next to mine, clutched in arthritis molded hands. His apartment still smells of Marie’s Bellodgia and Arpege. A golden glow scampers into warm corners of dimly lit Aubergine’s at the end of restaurant row where Jacqueline, Michelle and Annette share secrets of young women over rich expresso and lemon tarts to the strains of Mood Indigo. January swirls above the street’s night life like a parasol holding this portrait in time. 3-4-23 Contest: Four Cafes Sponsor: Julia Ward 200 Words

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Date: 3/14/2023 1:20:00 PM
wow, you write BEAUTIFULLY in prose. I won't even dare attempt this challenge!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/14/2023 3:25:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much! I had a wonderful time creating the characters and embellishing the scene. Oh, I hope you give it a try! It really is like writing a haibun without the haiku and I so enjoyed your last haibun. For me, prose incorporates so many of the elements of poetry - simile, metaphor, alliteration, personification, imagery (just a few of your many writing strengths) - just strung together in a different structure. I keep thinking of your wonderful stories about summers on your grandparents farm and what wonderful prose they would make. Anyway, that being said, I am ever grateful for your continued support and friendship! Blessings!!
Date: 3/9/2023 1:38:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive prose that you have written for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/13/2023 12:35:00 PM
Hi Sara! So glad you enjoyed my bird's eye view of the street life in a small village on a January night. Not only was the theme inspiring but a friend gave me a drawing of her bird's eye view of a busy street that contributed to the poem. Your message was a blessing and lifted my spirits. Many thanks! Sending prayers and blessings!!
Date: 3/4/2023 7:32:00 PM
Wow Sam, I really enjoyed reading this one. Almost like an excerpt from a short story. Great penning here. Spill ink!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/4/2023 8:35:00 PM
Hi Daniel! Many thanks for your delightful feedback. Very inspiring. This is a great theme for Julia's contest with so many opportunities to explore the cafes on a January night. You are right - it would make a good foundation for a short story! Hope all is well. Blessings to you!!
Date: 3/4/2023 3:13:00 PM
A lovely prose, Sam!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/4/2023 8:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Ann. It was such fun to create this neighborhood with its cafes! Hope you are well. Blessings to you!
Date: 3/4/2023 1:09:00 PM
You nailed it Sam, this is really good. Well done.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/4/2023 3:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Mark! I really loved this theme and was so happy that Julia asked for prose. There are a million stories to be told from the four cafes on a winter night. Your message and feedback mean a great deal to me. Congratulations to you on your bronze medal in the Marathon! Your entries were amazing. I looked forward to reading each one. All the best to you. Blessings!!
Date: 3/4/2023 12:01:00 PM
What a lovely write, Sam! Filled with fantastic imagery. Fills the senses and I smile! A worthy contender!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/4/2023 12:24:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim. This theme really captured my imagination. Had fun writing prose for a change of pace. Seems there are many wonderful interpretations of this theme. So many stories to be told. All the best. Sending you blessings! Happy Lent!

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