Four Cafes

Four Cafes

Winter mists swirl up from puddles on the cobblestones blurring the names of the four cafes facing the narrow boulevard.  Townspeople and visitors walk briskly with their heads down, collars up, against January’s invading chill.

From my apartment window I gaze hypnotized as people scurry through invading night like fallen leaves.

Madeleine and her small son, in a shopworn cap, wait outside darkened How Wheat It Is for day old bread.  Breakfast.

Light from the bistro next door, scattered through the raindrops, makes prisms.  A couple, identities disguised by distance, celebrate new love over chardonnay in bright blue like a rain painting reflecting on the street.

Old Charles slowly pushes open the heavy doors of Four Seasons Café, white paper box, leftovers for lunch in his apartment next to mine, clutched in arthritis molded hands.  His apartment still smells of Marie’s Bellodgia and Arpege.

A golden glow scampers into warm corners of dimly lit Aubergine’s at the end of restaurant row where Jacqueline, Michelle and Annette share secrets of young women over rich expresso and lemon tarts to the strains of Mood Indigo.

January swirls above the street’s night life like a parasol holding this portrait in time.

3-4-23
Contest: Four Cafes
Sponsor: Julia Ward
200 Words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 1:20 PM
wow, you write BEAUTIFULLY in prose. I won't even dare attempt this challenge!
Kauffman Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 3:25 PM
Andrea, thank you so much! I had a wonderful time creating the characters and embellishing the scene. Oh, I hope you give it a try! It really is like writing a haibun without the haiku and I so enjoyed your last haibun. For me, prose incorporates so many of the elements of poetry - simile, metaphor, alliteration, personification, imagery (just a few of your many writing strengths) - just strung together in a different structure. I keep thinking of your wonderful stories about summers on your grandparents farm and what wonderful prose they would make. Anyway, that being said, I am ever grateful for your continued support and friendship! Blessings!!
Kendrick Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 1:38 PM
Very descriptive and expressive prose that you have written for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
Kauffman Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 12:35 PM
Hi Sara! So glad you enjoyed my bird's eye view of the street life in a small village on a January night. Not only was the theme inspiring but a friend gave me a drawing of her bird's eye view of a busy street that contributed to the poem. Your message was a blessing and lifted my spirits. Many thanks! Sending prayers and blessings!!
Turner Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 7:32 PM
Wow Sam, I really enjoyed reading this one. Almost like an excerpt from a short story. Great penning here. Spill ink!
Kauffman Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 8:35 PM
Hi Daniel! Many thanks for your delightful feedback. Very inspiring. This is a great theme for Julia's contest with so many opportunities to explore the cafes on a January night. You are right - it would make a good foundation for a short story! Hope all is well. Blessings to you!!
Peck Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 3:13 PM
A lovely prose, Sam!
Kauffman Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 8:28 PM
Thank you so much Ann. It was such fun to create this neighborhood with its cafes! Hope you are well. Blessings to you!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 12:01 PM
What a lovely write, Sam! Filled with fantastic imagery. Fills the senses and I smile! A worthy contender!
Kauffman Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 12:24 PM
Thank you so much Kim. This theme really captured my imagination. Had fun writing prose for a change of pace. Seems there are many wonderful interpretations of this theme. So many stories to be told. All the best. Sending you blessings! Happy Lent!
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