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Four Cafes

Inside cooped up in my loft all autumn with writer’s block, it was time.  I arrived on New Year’s Day.  I wanted a fresh start, so I took a well-deserved hiatus.
        
Such grandeur, and glory, partaking in wine, croque monsieur and then champagne so decadent.  I met him in a bar café, the one alongside three others in a row!  He indulged my fancy with a Moulin Rouge cabaret, a real gentleman; flamboyant, debonair, and flippant.  Montgenevre mistakenly booked my room.  By chance of fortune, he overheard the desperation of my voice, cawing at the matradee.  “I know my way around.   We’ll find you a place to stay until they get their affairs in order.” 
        
I heard a voice whisper, “You can stay as long as you like, mon chéri.”  This morning I awoke alone, I remember late last night looking out his high-rise apartment window, down at the four cafés', to see what he sees, think what he thinks.  Long leggy locals, intoxicating femme's, drinking peppermint schnapps to tame the harsh chill of January.  Perusing today’s paper, I noticed his name, Emile Zola VI.   He’s a journalist?!  My muse reignited my passion to write.  A work in progress.  


A croque monsieur-is a hot sandwich made with ham and cheese.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 2/23/2023 9:41:00 PM
A most enjoyable write, Anaya. Not many people can write successful micro-fiction. You certainly have accomplished to tantalise the senses with a hint of depth (the ice-berg affect).
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Date: 2/24/2023 8:58:00 AM
Focusing on the narrative movement instead of the character, right? Thank you, Suzette! Your wonderful and encouraging comments really help. Glad you enjoyed! Anaya
Date: 2/19/2023 5:10:00 PM
Both poem and picture are absolutely beautiful. Best wish :)
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Date: 2/19/2023 5:54:00 PM
Thank you, Fin!
Date: 2/19/2023 4:54:00 PM
Very nice, I like the story that is unfolding here. It had me looking in my mind as you looked out the window to see what he sees. I don't know about the type of poem, I only know and understand rhyme (old school.. I can understand this and I give it a 5*****$tars... I usually don't read anything but rhyme.. I will take a look at other's you have written ( from the heart) glad I got to read it. Ps thanks for your comment as well..
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Date: 2/19/2023 5:54:00 PM
Thank you, Jessy James! It's prose, what the contest called for, (narrative).
Date: 2/19/2023 6:13:00 AM
A fun write, Anaya…oui! Mais oui!
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Date: 2/19/2023 9:31:00 AM
I would rather die of passion than of boredom—Emile Zola ....... Lol. Thank you, Kim! It's so good to see you, mon amie.
Date: 2/19/2023 2:39:00 AM
The view from your window interspersed with nuances of French prose works perfectly for me Anaya, A masterpiece, Hell why not Mon Cheri! Cheers David
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Date: 2/19/2023 9:28:00 AM
Bonjour, you may have noticed I put two paintings together to create the effect I was looking for, yes, it worked? Thank you, so much for your encouraging and sweet compliments and cheers. You are always a pleasure, mon ami.
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