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Four people were walking at four fourty four Faith Fullen at aft and Phil Fallon at fore Then Fallon moved aftward and Fullen went fore Till fullen was first and Phil Fallon was four ~For the Four, For, Fore contest~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/19/2013 8:43:00 AM
A very clever and creative take on this contest. Well done! I love that you only used four lines too.
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Date: 3/1/2013 8:28:00 AM
fffffffffffery ffffouurfoorreefooorre funny
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Date: 11/30/2012 12:02:00 PM
Sorry so late but I am here now to say congratulations on your win in this contest Isaiah. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/24/2012 11:05:00 AM
While stumbling through the text of this tongue twister temptation tried tauntingly to trip me up... Trepidation tripped Treacherously onto the scene and transgressions came terribly close to traumatic reality..... Jake
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Date: 11/23/2012 6:03:00 PM
Isaiah, congratulations with your win in Debbie's contest~ PD
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Date: 11/23/2012 3:27:00 AM
Congratulations Isiah, love this one xx
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Date: 11/13/2012 5:08:00 PM
wow, very clever this is. I think Deb, the judge will really like this in her contest!!!
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Date: 11/12/2012 10:09:00 AM
I love this. I hope it won, it surely should have. I see you are new. Welcome. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/10/2012 3:21:00 AM
Very well penned Isaiah! It makes for a good story and you've worked it into the theme cleverly. Nice! Very nice!
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