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Four-Post Bed

T C O O E L S D as are the satiny sheets; gossamer bright veil overcomes the four-post bed, where your openness envelops the goose down pillows. i avoid their feathery touch to lie my ringlets upon your handsome chest. the steady beat grows stronger...peaks. we both, like passionate-wine…. like the twilight or sunrise sky, transformed from vanilla to plum. the warmth reddens our hair to Viking-strength, thrusts like waves, the rapturous ebb and flow sea - down, down to our feet. This duo - a waterbed, two currents of a tantalizing hot tsunami. hibiscus lips, likewise slide and light disappears as eyelids shut tight in moan. afterward serpentine struggle remains in the volcanic ember of wrinkled sheets and W T A O R E M S

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Date: 8/29/2019 12:41:00 PM
Look at this bed! Warm toes - great ending!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2019 12:45:00 PM
Thank you from the top of my head to the bottom of my toesies! :)
Date: 8/28/2019 5:21:00 PM
Wow, it's so fancy that I'm speechless. It's a bit pity html tags are not available here to shape it perfectly. On the other hand, a little, hm, rumpledness(?) is appropriate here)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2019 5:45:00 PM
I was thinking all that as well! LOL
Date: 8/28/2019 12:09:00 PM
You write with a magical flow. And moreover, you should publish such beauty. It's unsurpassed,By any standard. Panagiota xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2019 5:46:00 PM
Thank you so much! Throwing kisses, sending hugs! ...Kim
Date: 8/28/2019 10:59:00 AM
A very creative piece Kim, but very soon you'll have the motion of the ocean for real. Love the line Viking strength, they were certainly a force to be reckoned with. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2019 11:28:00 AM
Looking forward to my ocean voyage! :)
Date: 8/28/2019 9:22:00 AM
Makes me want to go back to bed. : ) Wonderfully affectionate and alluring Kim. I like how you did this.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2019 9:24:00 AM
Thanks so much! Like many muse-ings it started one way and transformed itself!

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