Fountain

The sky collects cloud Today you are lenient Fountain in the vent ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ April 16, 2016

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/8/2016 7:11:00 AM

A very interesting poem, Probir. Quite thoughtful. I'm new to this site, so I'm learning the various poetic forms. Senryu appears simple, yet challenging. Expressing a coherent theme w/minimum lines is not easy. But you appear to have mastered it quite well. Ty for sharing your poetic prowess w/us, sir. Much love to you.

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/8/2016 11:59:00 PM

Thank you ...

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/15/2016 9:33:00 PM

Lovely three lines Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/15/2016 10:00:00 PM

Thanks Lenny...