Foster a Colored Utopia

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Squalls in the head, the weather of observation. Dreadful matters that may erase edification. Thus, every prognosis is begotten in that way. To dwell on the bewildered during the day. The visible image appends our worms. Weathermen may warn of imminent storms. I endow the dream that is unfolding now. The serenity of a blemished realm vow. Explore the world as if you were a bird in the sky. Savoring every time utterly of one's life way Take a leap of faith and release your fear. While you're still living, you may mend in dear. With the passage of time, healing will chime. Too many tears squandered precious time. Written: April 10, 2022

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/15/2022 8:05:00 AM

A "Beautiful" write and picture. Love This One. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/11/2022 5:05:00 AM

Wonderful images you create to deliver your message. Much inspiration throughout, Lasaad.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/11/2022 1:57:00 AM

An intelligent sonnet. I don't think crying is useless. Life will be better after.

Valsa George

Date: 4/10/2022 8:32:00 PM

"Explore the world as if you were a bird in the sky. Savoring every time utterly of one's life way Take a leap of faith and release your fear"...... A beautiful and powerful message !