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Forty Words- Today


            This life is a play,
It is a long journey;
      My dreams the pretty flowers,
Like wind blown sweet gems.
             The sky-  where they stay,
      Words drifting, soaring like birds;
My MUSE inspires me, endless,
               Forty words I wrote-  today !

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January 21, 2016


Poetry/Verse/Forty Words- Today
Copyright Protected, ID 16-747-815-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym

For the contest, Forty Words 
sponsor, Silent One

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 9:41 PM
HA, and that's because I haven't had time to read anything new. everyone always has a reply for me. sometimes they are interesting.other times thoughtful
A   Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 11:37 PM
Again, you are weclome
La France Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 8:18 AM
Linda, your ongoing support of my poetry is appreciated ~
A   Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 11:21 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your win. XOXOX Linda :)
La France Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 1:42 AM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations, so grateful !
A. Sharma Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Wonderful write Broken ..Congrats on big win!!
La France Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 6:56 AM
Upma, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats, appreciate !!
A  Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 12:18 PM
BROKEN, CONGRATS ON YOUR NICE WIN. **SKAT**
La France Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Thanks
Selfa Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 8:34 AM
Congratulations on your placement! You really deserve the win! :) -Hans
La France Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 4:07 PM
Hans, thanks so much for the congratulations, delighted !
Konos Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 6:37 AM
And forty terrific words you wrote today! Congratulations
La France Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 7:12 AM
Judy, thank you so for the terrific and the congratulations, delighted ~
Ebbs Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 9:41 PM
Congrats Broken! Nicely done :)
La France Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 6:20 AM
Edward, thank you for the nicely done and the congrats, so grateful !
Johnson Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 9:29 PM
Very pretty poem in forty words. Love, Joyce
La France Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 6:21 AM
Joyce, oh dear sweet Joyce, thank you for the pretty and the love, you are a delight ~~
Lane Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 8:54 PM
Very soft and encouraging.. how nice to have a muse that fills your mind with thoughts. Congratulations, BW
La France Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 6:22 AM
Lin, thank you for the congratulations and the nice comment, appreciate so much !!
Allison Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 5:51 PM
So uplifting Broken Wings am so so glad your muse is inspired as YOUR poems inspire me:-) hugs Jan xxx
La France Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 6:23 AM
Jan, thanks for being my friend, and happy to inspire, I am honored and delighted !
Scars Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 4:26 PM
BW, this poem is inspiring, well written and congrats on your placement in the contest *Smiles* -luloo
La France Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 5:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the congratulations and the smiles !
Inman Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 7:39 AM
What wonderful words they are, BW. I wish something would inspire me.
La France Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 12:24 AM
James, thanks for the wonderful and oh my gosh, you are a beautiful writer, never forget that, beautiful are your poems ~
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January 22, 2016 at 12:52 AM
LOVE THIS. Wow!!! Say, my hotmail is not letting me type notes!! It is so weird. I will try it again tomorrow. Got to come down here tonight for a bit, and I read my emails but could not answer them all. later!!
La France Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 5:37 AM
Andrea, thanks for the love and the visit. I got rid of Hotmail for that reason and use Gmail now !
Sage Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 7:41 PM
You've written an excellent poem today again, just like any other day....best of luck in the contest
La France Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 7:56 PM
Sage, thanks for reading my poem and the excellent, love that word ~
Nance Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 6:40 PM
I love it, like wind blown sweet gems-beautifully said ;)
La France Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 7:26 PM
Casarah, thanks for visiting and for the beautifully ~
Morris Brady Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 12:51 PM
How delicate, how fragile the image you have painted! Chrissie
La France Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 5:00 PM
Chrissie, thank you for the visit with that lovely comment ~
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