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Forty Percent

Forty percent was the chance it would rain, Which is what my phone app was predicting. I went for my walk with my eye to the sky, But the darkening clouds were conflicting. I had an umbrella which fits in the bag Where I carry my water for drinking, So I ambled on, getting further away And I wondered just what I was thinking. For, after a mile, rain came barreling down, Without one little drop as a warning. My umbrella unfurled, I retraced all my steps, Cutting short my full exercise morning. Though my sneakers were dripping, as well as my socks, I got home with just minimal stressin’ But I have to remember my phone often lies, Which is really a valuable lesson.

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Date: 10/23/2023 5:51:00 PM
You are so fun. I’d want to meet you, but I’m a boring person.
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Date: 10/23/2023 5:47:00 PM
Just had to see what 40 percent was about. The weather ha!
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Date: 10/23/2023 5:47:00 PM
Great one.
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Date: 10/22/2023 7:51:00 PM
Ha, ha! As they say, the weatherman has a 50% chance to be right -- for yesterday's weather. ~ Free Showers, but why don't My Customers Feel Clean
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Date: 10/21/2023 11:31:00 PM
Good poem - those percentages are coverage within the district that will experience rain, so perhaps you actually journeyed to where the rain was falling. Glad you had prepped by packing an umbrella. When it happened to me I got cheap rain ponchos for next time and kept them in my bag for over a year and didn't get caught in a heavy downpour until I didn't have the bag with the poncho's in! Enjoyed your poem x
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Date: 10/21/2023 2:03:00 PM
My thought is... who feeds the information to your phone? Therein lies the guilty one. lol Ilene.
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Date: 10/21/2023 12:24:00 PM
Great poem Ilene!! We are forever learning lessons. May the sun shine for you most days!
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