Anil Deo Poet Blank verse

Forsythia

FORSYTHIA II
Jostling with ubiquitous crocuses 
First leaves in forest, farm, or home
First greens of spring reveal 
The most eager petals I know -
My springtime “friend” uplifts me 
with myriad-sunned, golden yellows.

Early summer heat will bring larger leaves around us
And green will overwhelm my favorite firsts
My yellow bush fires: my yellow suns alas!
Will be swallowed by green sea monsters

How I wish forsythia will bloom all year long
My heart skips beats, my face smiles all day long
The power is thine; yellow-power like sunshine
As tiny burning bushes bombard me 
with buttery bombs of joy

Forsythia, Forsythia, I sing as if to my beloved
Forsythia, Forsythia, small, bright, sun-colored
How could I fall in love with one sidelined to hedgerows
So long as Spring swings around, my admiration grows.
Written on 04062017; modified for CONTEST on 04/07/2017

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Anil Deo April 10, 2017 at 6:00 PM Anne-Marie, I am so grateful to you for going back & finding my Forsythias. God bless you richly, and during this week's Resurrection Celebrations. (I am new, but I think you are a published poet: I am merely self-published). Forsythias just make me happy, whenever I spy them. Shalom, AD.

Anne-Marie Coreggia April 10, 2017 at 5:03 PM Anil, this was absolutely lovely. You composed such a beautiful scene that I could virtually see a myriad 'buttery bombs of joy' shining through in your poem:) Amitiés

Lisa Ricci April 7, 2017 at 6:04 AM Dear Anil. Thank you for gracing the morning and day. What a perfect way to start the day with beauty of words and beauty of imagery such as you say. One who sees and knows such beauty is blessed within. I am one of those who does see the beauty thus I am also blessed. May we all give thanks to our Creater and Jesus at this particular time. You have expressed yourself well Anil. Enjoy the morning. Anil Deo April 7, 2017 at 12:49 PM Lisa, I accept only because I know whatever good I do, it is with the Holy Spirit's strength & guidance (Romans 8:23 says my good works are filthy rags compared to what God expects - in the Law/10 Commandments - not by Grace. So, I go the extra step and declare: Grace is the Person of Jesus Christ.) May God bless you richly, Dear Poet/s

Emile Pinet April 6, 2017 at 8:32 PM This is a beautiful poem, laid out well and described with feeling, written from the heart and edited by the soul. Emile. Anil Deo April 7, 2017 at 12:46 PM Emile, thanks much Brother: you are poet even as you write reviews. I accept your G I F T S as from above. Shalom, AD