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Forsaken Voices

I hear the utter in my mind with comfort and ease, but will my insanity find that these voices could cease? There’s the noise and confusion, unrested and weary, I may never recover from this or begin to think clearly Sometimes I still hear fear’s pronunciation in the breeze. For all the times I remember how I used to be secure there are just as many hard times I’ve had to endure. When all was well for maybe one day I was confident, that was the day when my mania was so evident. I find that in this state of mind there is too much allure. So I take my thoughts to bed with me and get a headache, wondering if tomorrow these voices were just God’s mistake. I know deep down I need the silence to free the uproar, the quiet that I long for has been exchanged for abhor. My mind is weak and frail with voices created to forsake. Voices.... Contest Silent One December 3, 2018

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Date: 12/14/2018 11:08:00 PM
Very compelling and though-provoking ... nicely done!
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Date: 12/10/2018 12:22:00 AM
- Congratulations on this great winning poem, Laura :) - At the same time I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/8/2018 11:01:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this nicely done write , Laura,with great imagery. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 12/8/2018 10:06:00 AM
Great rhyme and flow to this poem, and a deep take on the contest, when we battle with out thoughts.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 12/3/2018 8:30:00 PM
Lovely writing to a somber theme.
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