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Forsaken

Night forages my thoughts and the darkness weeps shadows skirt the past and I'm left with emptiness and silence the only semblance of life are footprints deep inside I feel your presence as the knife rips out my tongue blood no longer drips but scars won't fade away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/18/2018 12:17:00 AM
My kind of poetry, I can feel the pain. Great write!
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Date: 1/14/2018 9:16:00 PM
I read this 4x today... I was just speechless for I know exactly that kind of feelings. But we can get thru. Just takes time :) a big hug my dear friend :)
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Date: 1/14/2018 8:50:00 PM
Sadly intense and heartfelt Tim, expressed with deep emotional imagery. A write that I feel in my heart and soul.. Shining poetry.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/14/2018 7:35:00 PM
i feel the intense emotions spill from every line Tim - very well penned:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/14/2018 12:48:00 PM
what an intense work written from the heart, tim... huggs
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Date: 1/14/2018 11:27:00 AM
Very deep and filled with such pain Tim. You have expressed it in a powerful way. Take care. I hope you are well.
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