Forlorn Lady

At last, long last
I saw him leave
Leave for good
And a stern stare
That followed him
Saw him turn not
Towards me 
Not once
I swear!
For if truth be told
He turned not at all!
But hurried forth briskly
To a point north of here
To his dear mademoiselle!
My tears will not cease
To irrigate my bosom
My stare will not decrease
For in the midst of all this
I dare not my strength
Discountenance, dare I?

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Date: 11/1/2013 5:23:00 PM
Yup Zombie poems are best performed LOL. Light & Love
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Date: 10/9/2013 11:36:00 AM
Splendid!!!... Terry
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Date: 10/7/2013 3:38:00 PM
I replied to your reply in "The Plains', if you could please check out! Won"t you try the Questionku? Invented by my friend Richard Lamoureux, here in the Soup, rules are; 3 lines; 4-5-6 feet; ending with a question. Example: (^_^) (I'm quoting you, with your permission): If truth be told (4 feet) / I dare not my strength (5 feet) / Discountenance, dare I? (6 feet)
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Date: 10/7/2013 3:38:00 PM
I replied to your reply in "The Plains', if you could please check out! Won"t you try the Questionku? Invented by my friend Richard Lamoureux, here in the Soup, rules are; 3 lines; 4-5-6 feet; ending with a question. Example: (^_^) (I'm quoting you, with your permission): If truth be told (4 feet) / I dare not my strength (5 feet) / Discountenance, dare I? (6 feet)
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/7/2013 3:40:00 PM
Sorry, I'll never learn to rule over this technology!
Date: 10/5/2013 9:48:00 AM
Heartbreaking yet incredible piece
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