Forlorn Gift

He just signed a grand contract
in curves of ink I worship now,
memories of writing on frayed pages
fade with twirling winds of time.
Dark ages of catastrophic wars
lit by my poured hope in desk lamp.
His grandmother healed prisoners in pain
with their agony preserved in diaries,
legends, hope, lost days of love,
they narrated, she wrote, I absorbed.
Ah! What freedom I'd experienced
being a scribe's magic wand of faith,
a light to the tattered world in rags
shone across grey skies to guide
derelict souls with valor on journeys,
I'd been a mighty sword in disguise.
Gifted to him in a transformed world,
beneath crumbling desires I weep,
I crave to pen emotions not business,
my brave stories in graves asleep.

June 25, 2020

The Old Scribe Poetry Contest
Sponsor: craig cornish
~Winner: 4th Place

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Date: 7/28/2020 10:46:00 AM
Such a descriptive, moving poem, Aditi--a WINNER! Janice
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Date: 7/29/2020 3:22:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Janice. :)
Date: 7/24/2020 9:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Old Scribe. I was very touched by your wonderful writing. ~ John
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Date: 7/29/2020 3:21:00 AM
Thank you for coming back to congratulate me dear friend. Your appreciation means a lot :)
Date: 7/24/2020 8:39:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, flowing meter and a picture richly painted. Congratulations, Aditi!
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Date: 7/29/2020 3:21:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Sam. Much love :)
Date: 6/27/2020 4:41:00 PM
Wonderful verse from first to last line, Aditi! It is always a pleasure to read your words. Your poetry captivates and inspires. Lots of luck in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Date: 6/28/2020 1:53:00 PM
I am really glad you love my muse Rhonda. Thanks for your visit and your gracious appreciation. Lots of love and blessings :)
Date: 6/27/2020 4:03:00 PM
Great verse for the old scribe contest. The title really goes well with the content! We must honor those who relate to us their brave stories of the past.
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Date: 6/28/2020 1:52:00 PM
I am rally glad you loved my words Andrea. Thanks for your visit and taking time to read my muse and for your appreciation. Blessings and love :)
Date: 6/27/2020 12:22:00 PM
This is so eloquent, 'curves of ink', 'frayed pages' 'lit by my poured hope in desk lamp' all these lines so rich and layered, a supreme write!
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Date: 6/28/2020 1:51:00 PM
Glad you love my words Michelle :) Thank you for your visit and your kind words of appreciation. God bless you!
Date: 6/26/2020 1:22:00 PM
Another masterpiece, Aditi. You weave a masterful tale of generations writing words that set souls free. You have continued that legacy so well. I expect this will do very well in Craig's contest. His standards are very high, but your words simply soar. Beautiful. Best wishes and many blessings, dear friend ~ John
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Date: 6/27/2020 1:32:00 AM
Glad you love my words John! His standards are high indeed so I just tried to let this muse take me with the flow without any expectations. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation dear friend. God bless you :)
Date: 6/26/2020 12:28:00 AM
What more can I say? You are a goddess of superb imagery dear Aditi...you dominate the land, the seas and the sky with your magnanimous poetry...Keep inspiring!
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Date: 6/26/2020 2:21:00 AM
You are always gracious with your appreciation and I feel honored to be on the receiving end. Thank you for your kind words. God bless you. Much love :)
Date: 6/25/2020 2:56:00 PM
Awesome write, in your gifted words--superbly done, Aditi.
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Date: 6/25/2020 11:13:00 PM
Thank you for your kind appreciation Vijay :) Blessings
Date: 6/25/2020 8:27:00 AM
Lovely
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Date: 6/25/2020 12:42:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and kind appreciation Martin :)
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