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Forgotten Memory

Forgotten memory ~ My heart is as dreary as this day seeking only the warmth of your smile so that this winter chill becomes a soon forgotten memory ~

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Ronald D Thompson

Date: 1/30/2020 4:30:00 PM

Nice one Chris. Simple message exquisitely penned. Ron :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2020 4:38:00 PM

Thanks my friend.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/30/2020 2:34:00 PM

this is lovely, chris! it isn't easy to say so much in just a few words, but you've done it here...

Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2020 2:39:00 PM

Thank you Ilene. What a nice thing to say

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/30/2020 12:52:00 PM

My heart was a bit dreary , until I read this. You know how to bring smiles with your writing :)

Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2020 2:39:00 PM

Thank you so very much Heidi. Happy this made you smile.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/30/2020 10:47:00 AM

Love the twist! What you long to forget is the Winter chill and warm up with a pair of lips! Nice, Chris!

Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2020 11:43:00 AM

That's about it. :) Thanks so much Kim.

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/30/2020 9:35:00 AM

The beauty of every day can be found in your words ... hope you find that smile to regain warmth. Gorgeous write Chris :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2020 11:43:00 AM

Thank you so very much Sandy. Happy this one touched you.

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/30/2020 8:38:00 AM

Lovely, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2020 11:42:00 AM

Thank you Line

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 1/30/2020 7:53:00 AM

Wow!!! This is wonderful!! This brought a smile!!

Chris Green
Date: 1/30/2020 11:42:00 AM

Thank you so very much Swetha. I am happy you liked this one so much.