Forgotten

So much is said in this short peace.Nicely done.Thank you for your kind words on your comments.I posted a couple new one's.Hope your day is good.

What an uplifting view. Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. I really like the last line. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Have a good week. Karen

well, dang. I just went back to see, and you didn't win with this one that I liked so much. Better luck next time, Caroline. You come up with some really good stuff. Now it is time for my beddie bye. LUv, Andrea

A very original and creative approach to the contest, Caroline. Hope this haiku ranks high! Love, Carolyn

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breathing under mist-like that!

This one I think is going to do very well in the contest. I really like it, Caroline! luv, andrea

I really like this. Good luck in the contest, Caroline! LUv, andrea

Ooooh, this is good, Caroline! Perfect imagery, perfect Haiku! I wish you good luck in the contest! Peace, love, audrey

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Caroline. Wishing you a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Oh, "forgotten through time"....I love that line, so thought provoking and unique! Good luck...looks like a winner! :)

A well written haiku Caroline, it has a ghostly feel that suits the Picture and the title of the contest. good luck....Margaret

You are being just or fair to find a way to uplift again the beauty within this view, so timely before they vanish in our eyes. Beautifully interpreted, Caroline. Appreciate your kind words to my end line words. (^_^) Noel.