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The hardest thing to give is forgiveness, it goes against anger's impulsiveness. Because emotions tend to control thoughts, and anger is primed to fill in the dots. Your heart won't abandon love for regret, and given enough time, it will forget. Yet, it is more difficult to forgive a sin strained through an emotional sieve. The urge to strike out and send the hurt back, can make you want to go on the attack. And when love asks to forgive, love asks much, yet you must admit, you would miss his touch. Emerging from flames, the phoenix of hope softens emotions so lovers can cope. And forgiveness often approaches you in the guise of memories shared by two. You persuade yourself to forgive the wrong, and encourage your heart to get along. For, you're convinced you'll feel better inside soon as your primal impulses subside.

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Date: 11/16/2017 7:48:00 PM
Words of wisdom.. Well done.
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Date: 11/17/2017 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Line, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/11/2017 10:07:00 PM
Wonderful write and a well-deserved Honorable Mention, Emile - congratulations and blessings, friend! :-)
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Date: 11/12/2017 9:10:00 AM
Thank you Gregory, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/10/2017 11:22:00 PM
Congratulations, Emile, on a great write. Hugs eve ~`*
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Date: 11/11/2017 9:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/31/2017 8:42:00 PM
It is so true, time is a healer, but it's also a revealer, of what one has hiding deep inside, this is a wonderful sage write, should do well in the contest!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/1/2017 3:19:00 PM
Thank you so much John, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/31/2017 3:06:00 PM
Very beautiful poem, forgiving brings a solace and peace to oneself! You have expressed this so well!
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Date: 11/1/2017 3:20:00 PM
Thank you Arthur, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/31/2017 2:06:00 PM
Emile I think this is one of your best! Spot on. Fave :) xomo!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/1/2017 3:19:00 PM
Thank you so much Maureen, I truly appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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