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Forgiveness

Rooms stay mostly closed With no dews of forgiveness Doors would not have sung Black spots on wheat stems When offered forgiving spray Ears are green again Small blue steps of heart White flowers of acceptance Jesus in our thoughts Look at your cool brook This way this way calls the bird Forgiveness in splash ______________________________________ 20 August 2016 For ‘Forgiveness’ Senryu Contest hosted by Laura Loo

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Date: 8/23/2016 1:11:00 PM
This is beautiful and deep Probir!Congratulations!
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Date: 8/22/2016 4:49:00 AM
Your senryu seem very Zen Probir and are my favorite of all the entries. Congratulations on your win!7 ; )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/22/2016 5:39:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/21/2016 5:05:00 PM
Probir, your poem is a very deep 'forgiveness' Senryu. Congratulations on your 3rd Place win. Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/22/2016 5:44:00 AM
Thank you ... Your definition and description of forgiveness securing you first place was great too, and congratulations on your success...
Date: 8/21/2016 10:52:00 AM
Probir, a very deep poem...Jesus should always be in our thoughts...congrats on your placement and thank you very much for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/21/2016 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Laura ...
Date: 8/20/2016 6:23:00 PM
Love your images. Very pretty, Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/21/2016 12:28:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea ...
Date: 8/20/2016 7:42:00 AM
A wondrous necklace of Senryu ,my dear friend, Probir! A 7!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/21/2016 12:29:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios ...

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