Forgiveness

You asked me to forgive you
Still you would cause me pain again
Your words rained down like daggers
Soaking my soul with so much pain

I know i was taught to forgive
It became harder every day
All the ways you had to hurt me
I was the game you loved to play

You had quite an imagination
The ways you would describe my demise
Thankfully I chose not to follow
Yours was a pathway paved with lies

In my mind I reinvented 
Chose a future that was worthwhile
Yes I took a few steps backwards
Still moving forward all the while

As the gap between us lengthened
God took my heart and made it whole
Yes beginnings are important
I learned forgiveness plays a role

It was not so much about you
Or all the things that you had done
My healing could not be complete
Without knowing God's only Son

There is light beyond the darkness
Perhaps one day I will see your face
I hope you asked God for forgiveness
Your sins will be gone without a trace

If my Savior can forgive you
The way he has forgiven me
There is more to who you were
Than what I was able to see

I forgive you dad

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/22/2016 11:57:00 PM
Truly a masterpiece, Richard. It left me in awe. The tender humanity and graceful truths expressed are breathtaking as penned by a skillful poet who has mastered his craft well. Kudos, my friend. That was an uplifting Sunday morning read. Much love to you. RW
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Date: 11/10/2015 9:42:00 AM
WOW WOW WOW......to all time favs Richard.. thank you.. :) love, peace and happiness to your dad for teaching you the art of forgiving :) :* Stay blessed always.. ~7~
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Date: 6/20/2014 8:02:00 AM
A very well penned poem.( Forgiveness makes you even more powerful and less vulnerable. You forget your sufferings only after forgiving otherwise they haunt around you.) Keep smiling always...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/20/2014 8:56:00 AM
Thanks for this thoughtful comment Archana.
Date: 5/22/2014 7:03:00 PM
wow great words Richard, great poem indeed, forgiveness is important, your message is important thank you for sharing
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/22/2014 7:05:00 PM
Thanks Casarah, I appreciate you reading one of my older ones.
Date: 5/10/2014 3:23:00 AM
Heart-wrenching... I admire your strength and your flow of words. Always, Laura
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/10/2014 7:52:00 AM
Good morning and Thanks Laura.
Date: 5/6/2014 5:58:00 AM
I am glad you found the power of forgiveness. It frees us, releases the chains that hold us to the past. Your heart is too big to be bound. Love it!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2014 7:40:00 AM
Thanks Monterey, I am thankful my heart has been emptied and refilled with God's Love.
Date: 5/3/2014 2:25:00 AM
Powerful message Forgive , trust in God, not many can apply to that, and others can find peace with forgiveness and fate. Pain and hurt, and you forgiving your dad, the chapter is closed to move forward, I personally can relate to that in some way. Beautiful...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2014 8:15:00 AM
There is great freedom that comes with forgiveness it can transform both the person giving and receiving it. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 5/1/2014 3:56:00 PM
Forgivness is a healer in itself,It brings silent joy and peace of heart.So happy I an to be here.Missed this amazing poetry and friends like you ,here..Lovely and inspiring message.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/1/2014 7:11:00 PM
Where have you been Charmaine? I hope somewhere exotic.
Date: 5/1/2014 9:37:00 AM
Speechless..and touched.....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/1/2014 1:55:00 PM
Thanks again for all your visits this morning.
Date: 4/29/2014 8:34:00 PM
Richard, wonderful poem. A wonderful guiding principle for life...forgive others for God has forgiven me. My sins put Him on the cross.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2014 8:21:00 AM
We often forget how personally we are involved, we tend to think about others sin and forget that he personally died and suffered for our transgressions. Thanks for this wonderful comment.
Date: 4/29/2014 7:07:00 AM
God has given you many blessings Maybe the greatest has been to have the ability to forgive Dad even in absentia for his many hurts that he caused. You have such a wonderful heart. God loves you as I do Mom/Mamabear
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2014 8:08:00 AM
It was formed by you mom! I love you.
Date: 4/27/2014 10:59:00 PM
I have thought long and hard about the subject you raise here. I have hurt many people and have been hurt by many people as well. And I have come to realize that "I am sorry" does not work. At least not right away. We must wait until the scar has faded. And then say "I am sorry". Only then can we truly grant "Forgiveness". Like you my father hurt me. He is no longer with us. But if he were I would forgive him. For the scars have faded. And I know he loved me.Thank u 4 this lovely thought.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2014 11:32:00 PM
I believe forgiveness is more of a gift to ourselves and with it God purifies our spirit and in the process provides us a glimpse of his own heart.
Date: 4/27/2014 9:34:00 PM
Hello Richard, your ability to write and have the reader feel like they are in your shoes is amazing. I am not always so good at compliments, but this poem is a gem and for so many reasons. There are a few messages here, and the way you tell a story, its heartwarming, it shows that good can come from all things, aside from a great poet, you are a kind wise person.
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Date: 4/27/2014 11:37:00 PM
It is comments like this that make writing such a privilege. You have warmed my heart. Thank you for expressing your feelings in this way. From where I am sitting I would say you are good at compliments. You have a good heart my friend.
Date: 4/27/2014 5:16:00 PM
forgiveness cleanses and heals Rick hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2014 11:37:00 PM
Hugs back. Good night Shadow.
Date: 4/27/2014 3:51:00 PM
Oh, it all starts with forgiveness and letting go. You will see. You will yourself with new things, new replacements to take the place of the old hurts. Truly now you can be whole. Great poem, Rick!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2014 11:39:00 PM
This forgiveness took place long ago and indeed much has been gifted to me. Poetry is one of the gifts.
Date: 4/27/2014 11:29:00 AM
Soaking of my soul with so much pain! Nice.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2014 5:33:00 PM
Thanks for visiting.
Date: 4/27/2014 9:37:00 AM
Richard!!!!!!!! Bless you! I've read your book, felt your pain, and now I rejoice in your victory.....Forgiveness is divine. We can't manufacture it. So happy to read this.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2014 2:31:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, I have much to be grateful for. Hugs Rick.
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