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Forgiven by Proxy

Forgiven by Proxy

Forgiven, Heavenly Father’s Son, by proxy bore our death.

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
February 16, 2010

Poetic form: Monoku

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/18/2010 5:55:00 AM
great monoku, hi-cutie 2u too my attempt at haiku humor. corny I know. Thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 2/16/2010 10:43:00 PM
Very true on this line, Dane Ann. The saviour of mankind. The bounteous goodness of God. Appreciate your kind words this morning. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 2/16/2010 2:38:00 PM
Its a powerful message, many still do not get.... and thanks so much for your comment on my poetry, keep your pen flowing, dear heart... Constance
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Date: 2/16/2010 2:03:00 PM
Dear Dane Ann, Perfection in " Monoku "and the Words : so True I LOVE YOUR Beautiful SELF LOVE ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG Dane I want t6o change my Entry to YOUR Contest I'm Computer Illiterate so I can't do it I have already deleted it but it It's still there Am I too late LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 2/16/2010 12:38:00 PM
YEs, you got that right, Dane. By proxy is a very big concept in my church in more ways than one! Very nice, and thanks so much for your comment on my Beatle song!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/16/2010 12:12:00 PM
Amen! Blessings to you for sharing this timeless and powerful message with us. You faith shines through your words in this poem. Thank you for the kind comment. Keep on writing!!!!!!!!!!! Karen
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Date: 2/16/2010 6:41:00 AM
I have enjoyed writing in your end line form.... Did you read my Acrostic/ End Line??? Thought I would add the Acrostic form to make it a bit more difficult.... Good poetry today my friend....:JP]
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Date: 2/16/2010 5:46:00 AM
Foregiveness is releasing! Dane check if I did your form correctlty Compassions Goal. Light & Love
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Date: 2/16/2010 3:45:00 AM
Interesting form and true content Thanks Daniel
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