Forgiven By Proxy

Forgiven by Proxy Forgiven, Heavenly Father’s Son, by proxy bore our death. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 16, 2010 Poetic form: Monoku

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/18/2010 5:55:00 AM

great monoku, hi-cutie 2u too my attempt at haiku humor. corny I know. Thanks for your welcome comments.

Noel Villarosa

Date: 2/16/2010 10:43:00 PM

Very true on this line, Dane Ann. The saviour of mankind. The bounteous goodness of God. Appreciate your kind words this morning. (^_^) Noel.

Constance La France

Date: 2/16/2010 2:38:00 PM

Its a powerful message, many still do not get.... and thanks so much for your comment on my poetry, keep your pen flowing, dear heart... Constance

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/16/2010 2:03:00 PM

Dear Dane Ann, Perfection in " Monoku "and the Words : so True I LOVE YOUR Beautiful SELF LOVE ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG Dane I want t6o change my Entry to YOUR Contest I'm Computer Illiterate so I can't do it I have already deleted it but it It's still there Am I too late LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2010 12:38:00 PM

YEs, you got that right, Dane. By proxy is a very big concept in my church in more ways than one! Very nice, and thanks so much for your comment on my Beatle song!! LUv, Andrea

Date: 2/16/2010 12:12:00 PM

Amen! Blessings to you for sharing this timeless and powerful message with us. You faith shines through your words in this poem. Thank you for the kind comment. Keep on writing!!!!!!!!!!! Karen

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/16/2010 6:41:00 AM

I have enjoyed writing in your end line form.... Did you read my Acrostic/ End Line??? Thought I would add the Acrostic form to make it a bit more difficult.... Good poetry today my friend....:JP]

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/16/2010 5:46:00 AM

Foregiveness is releasing! Dane check if I did your form correctlty Compassions Goal. Light & Love

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 2/16/2010 3:45:00 AM

Interesting form and true content Thanks Daniel