Forgiven

Her ruined life lay at her feet; shattered bits of days;
Words spoken in anger echo in the wake
Of departure.

Her future now uncertain; broken dreams,
Bits of forgotten promises scattered like leaves
Of winter.

Her greatest regret, her prominent guilt,
Actions taken carelessly; a thoughtless whim 
Of emotion.

Her greatest sorrow, her dominant grief;
Words spoken fall deaf; sincerity unheard and devoid
Of absolution.

She is sorry.
She seeks forgiveness.

From him there is none; he has left her behind
And gone on to another life, a separate home
Of existence.

She is sorry.
She seeks forgiveness.

From Him there is all, encompassing her with love,
Enfolding her in His arms, sheltering her with His shield
Of compassion.

Her ruined life lay at her feet; she looks no longer to the world
But to Him to absolve the pain, the sorrow
Of regret.

She is forgiven.

Her future recast; beautiful dreams,
Visions of heaven lay upon her heart like wings
Of angels.

She is forgiven.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 11:32 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in "Annalise's Contest". Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 7:13 PM
stellar write, deb! cheers for the great, happy win in the contest! :> nette
Freeman Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 10:27 AM
Beautiful free verse Deb for your 5th place honor, Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 9:49 AM
Congrats Deb on your wonderful win in Audrey's great contest with this excellent entry ... my friend.. enjoy another top ten with luv..
Mehta Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 6:20 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Audrey
Neels Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 3:38 AM
Awesome Deb, congratulations to you on your win in Audrey's contest ;) WN
Johnson Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 10:03 PM
Nice to know there is a refuge when humans afail. congratulations Deb. Love Joyce
Haick Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 7:49 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Deb! Congratulations! Love, Audrey
Devonshire Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 7:42 PM
So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Deb. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
December 17, 2010 at 5:24 AM
Sentiment and compassion flow with such ease through your words Deb. Keep them coming >> James :)
Guzzi Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 5:03 PM
so very lovely, a communicated sense of relief, nice use of alliteration and metaphor "lay upon her heart like wings/Of angels" line 4 perhaps shattered instead of broken..enough B's , but..it's really FINE..very very nice! Light & Love
Henderson Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 6:47 PM
Yes, He may not absolve the pain, but can make it bearable. Good point, good poem. You have a lot for only 15 days on the soup. I'm going to try to read more of them soon as I finish this post. Good luck and welcome to the soup. Charles
Mehta Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 1:21 PM
Nice poem on atonement with a nice caricature, deb
Devonshire Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 12:52 PM
It's a shame more people can't offer forgiveness, Deb. I left the olive branch hanging in my poem and the ones for whom it was intended have yet to accept it. I feel for the girl in your poem. Perhaps forgiveness is too much to hope for sometimes, but God will always grant it. Bless you for sharing this poem. Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 11:26 AM
such flowing words and touching sentiment marked with subtle spiritual tone... to forgive releases the soul from chains, deb... wishing you the big win in the contest! warmest, nette
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