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Forgetting Christine

Forgetting Christine As a thorn would pierce the skin And bury there, deep within Childish was my love for her Caught was I upon that spur Was it but, her air of grace Or that she was fair of face Beauty with a sense of plain Earthly built in every grain As she passed the flowers dim Grew brighter round her every rim Their blooms alone to signify An angel there was walking by Her rebel spirit could not hide The joy she brings upon her tide A crest of wistful whisperings From deep imagination springs Still she lives there in my muse Pouring thoughts, that refuse To let her go from every scene I’ll not forget my sweet Christine

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Date: 6/14/2025 2:29:00 PM
Hello CayCay, We try to improve as we write, most poets settle into what feels right for them eventually. Don’t recall crossing paths but I’m sure this won’t be the last. Take care, Richard.
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Date: 6/8/2025 6:03:00 PM
I read your 1st 3 postings then this and comparatively speaking - WOW. This poem is so smooth, the flow, rhyme, topic, each line a grabber. This reminds me of many people from my past who served as a muse then and still do to some extent. I just met you on the AI Blog. Don't know why we haven't crossed paths before, or if we have, forgive me, my rememberer is broken. This was so delightful, I'm off to read another. CayCay
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Date: 12/7/2024 12:18:00 AM
Lovely write. Great rhythm and flow. This is a lovely dedication to your muse.
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/14/2025 1:05:00 PM
Miss you x
Date: 11/12/2024 4:02:00 PM
Wow. Yes my friend. She is your muse like that guy I wrote of is mine. By the way , his name is GUY. But he is French Canadian and pronounces his name GEE with soft G . Love your porm
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Richard D Seal
Date: 6/14/2025 1:04:00 PM
Ah yes the one you’ve written about fifty poem’s for, think I’ve read them all. I’ve been calling him Mr Jee for a long time .

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