Forgetting

Once long ago I drove off and forgot 
my children.  They were home, tucked safe in bed.
I was far across town when I noticed
then rushed home at light-speed to retrieve them.

Now I am older, my kids have kids of
their own, and all I forget is myself
or parts of myself in that rhythm of 
things that give me dignity, like teeth, 

or shoes to protect my feet, or gas to 
get me to the DMV to pick up 
my handicapped placard, or even the
directions so I don’t get lost on the

freeway, in the canyons, or even in 
the damaged depths of my own mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/29/2020 2:20:00 PM
A great poem! Amazing! I think what I like the most is that your poems is that their beauty/genus is hidden in the simplicity/cruelty of life. No fancy or sophisticated words are needed when somebody can show life as accurately as you.
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Date: 12/23/2020 6:48:00 PM
...get older and einstein's understandings become those behind everyday's vision.... andt....we see so much more behind the scene-eries.....andt...yours was a rightly rite write.......nicely done : ) stan sand
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