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Forget Our Hearts Visions

Now that only forgotten promises remain, sounds of solitude are gifts I wish to obtain. Sentiments are temporary in a world full of change, affections are wasted in an insincere exchange. Some say my words are engraved too deep, others feel expression is only cheap, so close your mind and enjoy your sleep. because if you hear me then you'll weep. Sometimes we have to forget our hearts visions Life don't come with any terms and conditions Forgive me if I seem emotionally challenged, as I hide my feelings when everything seems unbalanced. My soul's invisible, your ignorance won't see it crying. Inquest of a grief stricken heart concludes into spirit dying. Trauma vibrates like an orchestra of lightning horns, with fate bleeding thistles in a rose garden of thorns. In the mourning of seeds that blossomed too soon, breathless, I wrote my name with stardust on the moon, but now i wander in a meadow full of nettles, as the ink of life is a burden upon the sepals. With silent sighs hidden behind a poetic verse, I ponder if the quill is a blessing or a curse. Sometimes we have to forget our hearts visions Life don't come with any terms and conditions Forgive me if I seem emotionally challenged, as I hide my feelings when everything seems unbalanced. You see... I'm struggling to discover a reason to survive, so I stand here screaming at the Grim Reaper to arrive. He mocks and laughs at the patheticness of my pleas, whilst inner demons offer my soul no apologies. I can see cosmic imposters in ebony horizons, misleading like fake guides sparkling like diamonds. Reminds me of a veiled star that never forgave me, who betrayed me to decay in the death of my poetry. Sometimes we have to forget our hearts visions Life don't come with any terms and conditions Forgive me if I seem emotionally challenged, as I hide my feelings when everything seems unbalanced. Oh regret, why do you look back with such anger? Sometimes words are the most toxic form of cancer. Are these just twilight stories before a prelude of sunset, or unwritten feelings I've learned to suppress, to forget?
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Date: 9/2/2023 12:22:00 PM
Ahhhh, this poem speaks to the soul. It's heart felt and oh so beautiful. Thank you for emoting beautiful ink.
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/2/2023 3:52:00 PM
Is this my gorgeous pal Michelle?
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Silent One
Date: 9/2/2023 2:46:00 PM
Thank you. Great to see you here
Date: 9/2/2023 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. I too have been away for a while. It’s a pleasure to be back and reading quality writing like this.
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Silent One
Date: 9/2/2023 2:47:00 PM
Thank yoi
Date: 8/25/2023 11:12:00 AM
First congrats on a fantastic poem that will go into a fav. Congrats on the POTD and well deserved. So glad to see you posting. Poem hits the heart and hard to let feelings go or if they ever do go away. love phyl
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Silent One
Date: 8/27/2023 3:08:00 AM
Thank you, nice to see you..
Date: 8/22/2023 10:31:00 AM
Hello Silent One, Congrats on the POTD. I have been betrayed also. Now many years have passed and I have let the hurt feelings go. I have moved on. If you keep remembering the pain , you can not get on with your life. Do not be stuck in the past. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/27/2023 11:28:00 AM
Hello Silent One, Right do not live in regret. I agree. Mh friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene\
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Silent One
Date: 8/27/2023 3:13:00 AM
I agree never live in the past and dont live with regrets.. Thank you dear.
Date: 8/22/2023 3:21:00 AM
Back with Congrats. Love to you and yours, God bless you, Gina
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Silent One
Date: 8/27/2023 3:15:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 8/21/2023 5:11:00 PM
A very feeling one. It describes my own feelings the past 6 years since betrayed by a doctor. I really think this.
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Silent One
Date: 8/27/2023 3:15:00 AM
I am sorry to hear that.. I hope you got justice.
Date: 8/21/2023 5:21:00 AM
"Trauma vibrates like an orchestra of lightning horns, with fate bleeding thistles in a rose garden of thorns. In the mourning of seeds that blossomed too soon, breathless, I wrote my name with stardust on the moon, but now i wander in a meadow full of nettles," Absolutely beautiful poetry! Extraordinary writing! If seeking and deeply questioning the nature of existence, brings about such brilliant poetry, I pray you never awaken to the balance of mediocrity. Blessing my friend.
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Silent One
Date: 8/27/2023 3:19:00 AM
Thank you for your great feedback... I am so glad you liked this one.
Date: 8/20/2023 3:44:00 PM
Sometimes words are the most toxic form of cancer, perhaps so but I found that your words along the years have soothed me and brought me great depth. Pain is inevitable, :(
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Silent One
Date: 8/27/2023 3:23:00 AM
Thank you.. You are always too kind.
Date: 8/19/2023 4:39:00 PM
A big hello and shout out from me. Love how this one reads like a song. Some really exquisite lines which the sadder lines seem to make sweeter. Congratulatiions from me on POTD and a glad to see a post from you again. Seems like old home week in here today. Fond wishes, SuZ
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Silent One
Date: 8/27/2023 3:49:00 AM
Thanks, appreciate your feedback.
Date: 8/19/2023 12:55:00 PM
YOU LIVE! Ahh to see you write again tis a joy even in the face of pen of pain X and Os
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Silent One
Date: 8/21/2023 10:22:00 AM
Indeed I do... apparently there is life outside the soup.. Thank you for your visit..
Date: 8/19/2023 1:18:00 AM
So good to read your new poem after a long while! Your writes always have the deepest of emotions hidden behind every line that you so wonderfully carve. The poignancy, ache and angst of this one can be felt within the heart's core. This piece is bleeding in vulnerability yet is poetically so elegant...I can feel the depth here.. So brilliantly done!
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Silent One
Date: 8/28/2023 1:57:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderful feedback... Nice to see you are enjoying Poetry Soup.
Date: 8/18/2023 6:49:00 PM
So glad to see you posting again. Dark, but very deep. You touch the core, that's what makes a great poet. I'd love to hear this as well.
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Silent One
Date: 8/28/2023 2:00:00 AM
Thank you Juliet..
Date: 8/18/2023 6:48:00 PM
Your poetic pen bleeds powerful poetry, indeed. Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 8/28/2023 2:08:00 AM
Cheers
Date: 8/18/2023 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD honors, Silent One. This poem is amazing! :)
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Silent One
Date: 8/28/2023 2:10:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 8/18/2023 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, S.O :)
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Silent One
Date: 8/28/2023 2:10:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 8/18/2023 1:55:00 PM
In this busy world, possessions consuming our thoughts, its so true, we don't see the hurt inside one we are supposed to care about. I see your heartache, even the grim reaper has passed you by, but there is a reason for living. I pray you find it soon to lighten your heavy heart and ease your troubled mind. You are special, and most worthy, and as one of God's children you deserve a happy life. You are a talented poet that's for sure. I wish you find the path to contentment and happiness very soon. Glad your poem has been made POTD.
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Silent One
Date: 8/28/2023 2:35:00 AM
Your words are too kind, thank you so much..
Date: 8/18/2023 1:50:00 PM
I knew this fantastic poem should get POTD. And now it has. So very deserving too. As it had so many truly wonderful verses and flowed so well. Bravo my friend! God bless.
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Silent One
Date: 8/28/2023 2:44:00 AM
Thank you Robert
Date: 8/18/2023 1:09:00 PM
Silent One, I'm so glad to see your poem, and your honor of this POTD. Your heart, no matter how torn, is real. Your poetry is a blessing, because you are here to write it. It is a sad poem. Love can be so beautiful, like your stardust writing on the moon, such a joyful phrase! Sorrow too is real, heartbreak so devastating and painful. Your ink is sometimes like unveiled tears. Reality. It is good to see you. I pray for you hoping you're ok. Congrats on POTD!
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Silent One
Date: 8/28/2023 2:48:00 AM
Thank you for your wonderful feedback and prayers..
Date: 8/18/2023 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, dear Silent!
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Silent One
Date: 8/28/2023 3:10:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 8/18/2023 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!! What an amazing write. Glad to see you back here. I love to read your wonderful writes. Love your line, "Oh regret, why do you look back with such anger?" So very true. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.............
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Silent One
Date: 8/28/2023 3:12:00 AM
Thank you for always being so supportive, it does not go unnoticed..
Date: 8/18/2023 10:37:00 AM
Hi, Silent One. A poignant reflection and a Fav poem for me. Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
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Silent One
Date: 9/2/2023 2:48:00 PM
Thank you for your comment and the fave
Date: 8/18/2023 9:49:00 AM
They say life is unfair, even if others care, c'est la vie. Although we wish upon the reaper. The deeper we delve into our souls better paths are our outcomes. The poisoned pen can express evil or devious and could backfire, true, SO. Forgetting our hearts visions may bring relief. My interpretation. Congratulations on POTD Silent One on touching poetry! I Am Anaya
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Silent One
Date: 9/2/2023 2:48:00 PM
Thank you for your interpretations... I appreciate your feedback thank you
Date: 8/18/2023 9:43:00 AM
Back with congrats on your potd, very well done dear poet.
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Silent One
Date: 9/2/2023 2:53:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 8/18/2023 9:10:00 AM
Deeply emotional and thought-provoking poetry, Silent One. Congratulations on your POTD. Thanks for sharing from your heart through your poetry. Welcome back. Bill
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Silent One
Date: 9/2/2023 2:55:00 PM
Thanks Bill
Date: 8/18/2023 8:56:00 AM
Oh, silent one - Loads of imagery to enjoy " I liked "Life don't come with any terms and conditions" Poem of the day - ay great read too! Good Luck - stay safe: Perry C.
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Silent One
Date: 9/2/2023 2:55:00 PM
Thank yoi
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