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Fruit - Forget! Feels famished Fast food frenzy ... Fix Finds Fresh fish Fat French fries Fabulous feast - Full! Light Up The Page 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May 3/10/19

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/18/2019 4:17:00 PM

Enjoyed both Lanterne, Jan, and one surely can't miss the free flowing alliteration! Congratulations on your deserved win. Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2019 5:55:00 PM

Love it, and love the picture. Love the REAL thing inside my mouth even more haha. Congrats, Jan.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2019 8:25:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/17/2019 12:28:00 AM

Hi Jan, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Joseph May

Date: 3/16/2019 6:07:00 PM

An appetizing treat Jan..Congrats on your win..

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/12/2019 6:06:00 AM

This one has a happy satisfying fun, fast, frenzied cadence! Good luck in the contest, my friend.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/12/2019 3:18:00 AM

Aha! Lovely feast, Jan:)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/11/2019 11:18:00 PM

Be sure to have it with fruit punch!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/11/2019 9:54:00 AM

How many of us are guilty of choosing fat french fries and opposed to fresh fruit - must say, I enjoy both - good luck in the Lanterne poetry contest Jan - enjoyed your write. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Constance La France

Date: 3/11/2019 4:28:00 AM

Jan, fat french fries, now you are talking my language, fabulous poem ~

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2019 7:47:00 PM

thanks Constance:-) we rarely have chips but had fish and chips with friends before we went to see les Mid Last night - both were fantastic!!!:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/10/2019 2:54:00 PM

Good one Jan , nothing beats good old fish and chips, remember them served in yesterdays newspaper. Good luck. Tom.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2019 3:03:00 PM

yes and we survived with the newsprint on our fingers lol - the chips definitely tasted better out of nerwspaper !:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/10/2019 2:04:00 PM

Hi Jan, I like what you came up with for the contest theme. Now I'm famished all of a sudden. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2019 2:12:00 PM

We are having 'British' fish and chips next Saturday I can't wait it will be a real treat:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/10/2019 1:44:00 PM

- Yes it will be a fabulous feast and so quickly done, Jan :) - A wonderful meal, good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2019 1:50:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise we have the most wonderful fish and chips here on the Island, we have it rarely just as a treat usually when we meet up with friends:-) going to have them next Saturday as we have tickets to see Les Miserables and I got tickets for friends for Christmas and will pay for the meal out too:-) hugs jan xx