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Forget Feeling Fruity

Fruit -
Forget!
Feels famished
Fast food frenzy ...
Fix


Finds
Fresh fish
Fat French fries
Fabulous feast -
Full!

Light Up The Page 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Joseph May

3/10/19

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Paul Callus Date: 3/18/2019 4:17:00 PM Enjoyed both Lanterne, Jan, and one surely can't miss the free flowing alliteration! Congratulations on your deserved win. Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/17/2019 5:55:00 PM Love it, and love the picture. Love the REAL thing inside my mouth even more haha. Congrats, Jan. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2019 8:25:00 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 3/17/2019 12:28:00 AM Hi Jan, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 3/16/2019 6:07:00 PM An appetizing treat Jan..Congrats on your win.. Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/12/2019 6:06:00 AM This one has a happy satisfying fun, fast, frenzied cadence! Good luck in the contest, my friend. Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 3/12/2019 3:18:00 AM Aha! Lovely feast, Jan:) Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 3/11/2019 11:18:00 PM Be sure to have it with fruit punch! Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 3/11/2019 9:54:00 AM How many of us are guilty of choosing fat french fries and opposed to fresh fruit - must say, I enjoy both - good luck in the Lanterne poetry contest Jan - enjoyed your write. Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 3/11/2019 4:28:00 AM Jan, fat french fries, now you are talking my language, fabulous poem ~ Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/17/2019 7:47:00 PM thanks Constance:-) we rarely have chips but had fish and chips with friends before we went to see les Mid Last night - both were fantastic!!!:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/10/2019 2:54:00 PM Good one Jan , nothing beats good old fish and chips, remember them served in yesterdays newspaper. Good luck. Tom. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/10/2019 3:03:00 PM yes and we survived with the newsprint on our fingers lol - the chips definitely tasted better out of nerwspaper !:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 3/10/2019 2:04:00 PM Hi Jan, I like what you came up with for the contest theme. Now I'm famished all of a sudden. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/10/2019 2:12:00 PM We are having 'British' fish and chips next Saturday I can't wait it will be a real treat:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/10/2019 1:44:00 PM - Yes it will be a fabulous feast and so quickly done, Jan :) - A wonderful meal, good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/10/2019 1:50:00 PM Thanks Anne-Lise we have the most wonderful fish and chips here on the Island, we have it rarely just as a treat usually when we meet up with friends:-) going to have them next Saturday as we have tickets to see Les Miserables and I got tickets for friends for Christmas and will pay for the meal out too:-) hugs jan xx