Forevermore

running and hiding and feeding and lying, stunning and confiding and bleeding and crying.
I saw you there in a crowded room, I felt that glare in a daze of gloom. You ran with fire up to my door, and then time stopped...forevermore. You seemed distracted, numb and stoic, your dreams abstracted, I did not know it. You were alleviated by pain and sorrow, you initiated death while joy I borrowed. I thought I knew what this life was for, and then beliefs stopped...forevermore. I knew there was nothing that I could do, and you knew that I believed in you. You chose to die without reason or rhyme, you froze from the Winter season of time. Forgiveness came just like before, and then mercy stopped...forevermore. It was December you died from addiction, I do remember you lied with contradiction. You sought out joy in the wrong place, you fought to destroy the smile on your face. Your life so lovely, beauty turned to abhor, and then you died...forevermore.
failing and concealing and needing and defying, wailing and revealing and heeding and dying.
and then my life ended... ...forevermore. July 5, 2017
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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Congratulations on your first place with this movIng and poignant poem Luloo!
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 12:14 PM
many thanks lovely Connie :)
Krampe Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 9:57 AM
Congrats on your win with this sad, well written poem, luloo.
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 12:14 PM
thank you Agnes :)
Daniel Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 8:59 AM
Congratulations on an excellent win, Luloo:)
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 12:13 PM
thanks again sweet Jo! :)
Soper Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 9:38 PM
Very sad but well written piece. conrats on the win...
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 12:13 PM
many thanks Joseph :)
Hamilton Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 3:24 PM
So sad Laura, but the internal rhyme gets me every time, also there was a sense of urgency in the cadence of this write, was truly stunning, worthy of a shared number 1 win!
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 12:12 PM
thank you so much dear John for the top placement, I am honored and have a blessed day :)
Roper Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 4:54 PM
So very heartfelt , Laura, emotions do run deep ~*
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 12:13 PM
thank you lovely Eve :)
Daniel Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 9:42 AM
A really sad write with excellent rhyming, Luloo:)
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 12:13 PM
thank you sweet Jo :)
Smith Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 12:53 PM
"and then it stopped" Quite as abrupt and fitting a title for the subject. Very well done LuLoo...
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 12:13 PM
thank you Charlie :)
Turner Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 10:24 AM
So sad, Laura. Beautifully written. Good luck my friend:)
Scars Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 12:12 PM
thank you DT :)
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