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Forever young

Some guys just want you for sex And I can see that But I really think that would be doing you an injustice I want to know the real you And who knows, maybe a relationship Take it to a higher level Who knows, we could be forever young What do you think? That’s quite good Paul,I mean, compared to last week's effort anyway. Was last week’s bad. Let me see now, you’re pulled. Did that lack substance. It was sort of to the point. And that was bad. Well, I did mention it to you the next morning. Was that in between, you’re a crap lover. You said you could do it all night. I did do it all night, slept like a baby. I know, but that wasn’t exactly what I had in mind. Did I or did I not show you a great time in the morning? No, you said you had to get a run in. I know, but after that, were you or were you not screaming. Are you surprised, there was blood everywhere, thought somebody had attacked you? How was I to know you fell down a hill. After that, did you not say it was out of this world. I could have said anything, I was still traumatised. I’m not surprised your husband doesn’t understand you. You staying at your sister's by the way. No, she’s at mines. Did you two read the marriage contract? I mean, I’m not religious or anything, but I think the Priest would be a little concerned about your infidelity. Have you met father Tom? Don’t think so. You have, he was the guy giving you sex tips. Was that him, he was brilliant, told me all the things that turned you on. Bloody great, you get the advice, I get the Hail Marys.

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Date: 3/25/2024 1:21:00 PM
I can't even respond Paul. Do you actually pay this therapist (?), in real money? LOL :)
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Paul Bell
Date: 3/26/2024 8:31:00 AM
Buy him a drink now and again. lol
Date: 3/21/2024 4:02:00 AM
Good Morning Paul, Thanks for another good giggle. May be you should seek out turning these hilarious dialogues into one act scenarios for the theatre? They are so cleverly done and the adult audience would be over come with laughter.
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Paul Bell
Date: 3/21/2024 7:32:00 AM
Imagine me cracking the whip in the theatre, it would be like death in the aisles. lol
Date: 3/20/2024 1:22:00 PM
Lol hilarious. Haha. I found it so funny the lines about being traumatized and how the other guy perceived her words! What a brilliant write this is, i love how you always take us on a journey through your creative and unique writes. This one is definitely worth the read.
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Paul Bell
Date: 3/21/2024 7:40:00 AM
She's stopped going to that Priest now.
Date: 3/17/2024 6:21:00 AM
Quite a story here lol... I take it that it is fictional.. great imagination..
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Paul Bell
Date: 3/17/2024 10:29:00 AM
It would need to be fictional for her husbands' sake. lol

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