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A VERY DEAR FRIEND OF MINE PAINTED THIS BEAUTIFUL ARTWORK! SHE CALLS THEM LOBLOPES!

Forever Together:

Mystical Moon answers All I need to know Tomorrow shall bring A joyous occasion. Patiently I wait Walking through time In this labyrinth Only the soul knows Fly like an eagle Carry my soul Unfold my heart In harmonic bursts Magical moments Finding love Always on my mind My beloved friend When faith returns The way we were Together as one Dreamers Love is like the rose Heralding the day Simply love Just you and me In a perfect storm A calming light came to me As I awoke A vision of pure light.
7~June~2017 For Best Title contest Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 6/29/2017 9:59:00 PM
This is amazing that these are titles, I was so intrigued by the reading it never occurred to me that this was a title poem. Truly masterful in composition, congrats Rick on a fine win!
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Date: 6/20/2017 5:09:00 AM
One gem of a poem you have written with your titles. Congrats on your win.
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White Wolf
Date: 6/20/2017 5:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Afzal /|\
Date: 6/20/2017 12:20:00 AM
I love the mystical quality of this poem, the symmetry and beauty. I have read it three times now and the more I read it the more I love it! Congratulations on your first placement WW! This is a fave for me. : )
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White Wolf
Date: 6/20/2017 12:25:00 AM
You are very kind, Connie! Thank you and have a great day /|\
Date: 6/19/2017 11:22:00 PM
So Nice. Congrats White Wolf to win top
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White Wolf
Date: 6/19/2017 11:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anisha /|\
Date: 6/19/2017 5:36:00 PM
Beautiful write WW...Congrats on your win
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White Wolf
Date: 6/19/2017 5:38:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Joseph /|\ Enjoy your day my friend
Date: 6/19/2017 4:11:00 PM
You have some wonderful titles and that picture is awesome!!!!!! many congrats on your win:-) Jan xx
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White Wolf
Date: 6/19/2017 4:20:00 PM
Isn't she talented? I love it! I take it this one placed? Haha! Thanks, Jan! Have a nice day on the Isle /|\
Date: 6/19/2017 1:07:00 PM
Great job on this!! It's really good :)
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White Wolf
Date: 6/19/2017 1:43:00 PM
Thanks my friend! I got about one hour sleep and poetry came to me last night! Haha /|\
Date: 6/12/2017 2:37:00 PM
Hello White Wolf. I hope this day finds you well. You were on a roll with the moon. How grand is that very. I'm a believer in the moon and her power not to mention light. Your words describe all of that wonderfully and beautifully even in a perfect storm (lol). This is well executed in composition and construction. Keep dreaming and believing. Beautiful expression throughout. Good luck with the contest.
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White Wolf
Date: 6/12/2017 2:44:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Lisa /|\
Date: 6/10/2017 9:22:00 AM
This is so beautiful WW :)
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White Wolf
Date: 6/12/2017 2:43:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi /|\
Date: 6/9/2017 12:21:00 PM
True lover's mystique this poem be, WW. Very romantic and well written. I love the form and lotus layering of this blossoming poem. Excellent write, my friend. Love how it begins and ends. Pure poetry. Love always.
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White Wolf
Date: 6/9/2017 10:53:00 PM
Thank you, RW /|\
Date: 6/8/2017 6:54:00 PM
Amazingly beautiful
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White Wolf
Date: 6/8/2017 8:19:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Michelle /|\
Date: 6/7/2017 7:14:00 PM
Very well done, WW, good luck in the contest ~*
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White Wolf
Date: 6/7/2017 7:25:00 PM
Thank you, Eve /|\
Date: 6/7/2017 9:28:00 AM
This a pure vision of de-light...terrfic
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White Wolf
Date: 6/7/2017 6:58:00 PM
This is the third time I've tried to reply! Thanks, Tim /|\
Date: 6/7/2017 8:29:00 AM
How can one not love this gorgeous yet magical piece. Fabulously done WW, just beautiful :)
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White Wolf
Date: 6/7/2017 6:54:00 PM
Thank you dear, Akkina /|\
Date: 6/7/2017 8:28:00 AM
What a beautiful poem so very well written good luck in the contest.
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White Wolf
Date: 6/7/2017 6:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Edward /|\
Date: 6/7/2017 7:44:00 AM
Nicely penned White Wolf
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White Wolf
Date: 6/7/2017 7:46:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph, enjoy your night/day /|\
Date: 6/7/2017 6:36:00 AM
Very nice, White Wolf! Love the pic too!
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White Wolf
Date: 6/7/2017 6:38:00 AM
Yes, isn't it marvellous /|\
Date: 6/7/2017 6:21:00 AM
Really, really well done Rick. You have so many fantastic titles woven into this wonderful poem. It was a real Magical Mystery Tour for me.
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White Wolf
Date: 6/7/2017 6:24:00 AM
I just know you could craft a far better one with yours, Chris! /|\
Date: 6/7/2017 2:41:00 AM
Well done, WW. I especially like these lines: "Fly like an eagle, Carry my soul, Unfold my heart
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White Wolf
Date: 6/7/2017 2:46:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Lin! Have a wonderful night/day /|\
Date: 6/7/2017 12:42:00 AM
So beautiful Budgie. I love these short sentences and all the feels in it. Good luck in the contest.
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White Wolf
Date: 6/7/2017 12:46:00 AM
Thank you my friend /|\
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