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A VERY DEAR FRIEND OF MINE PAINTED THIS BEAUTIFUL ARTWORK! SHE CALLS THEM LOBLOPES!

Forever Together:

Mystical Moon answers All I need to know Tomorrow shall bring A joyous occasion. Patiently I wait Walking through time In this labyrinth Only the soul knows Fly like an eagle Carry my soul Unfold my heart In harmonic bursts Magical moments Finding love Always on my mind My beloved friend When faith returns The way we were Together as one Dreamers Love is like the rose Heralding the day Simply love Just you and me In a perfect storm A calming light came to me As I awoke A vision of pure light.
7~June~2017 For Best Title contest Sponsored by: Laura Loo
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Hamilton Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 9:59 PM
This is amazing that these are titles, I was so intrigued by the reading it never occurred to me that this was a title poem. Truly masterful in composition, congrats Rick on a fine win!
Nusker Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 5:09 AM
One gem of a poem you have written with your titles. Congrats on your win.
Wolf Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 5:12 AM
Thank you so much, Afzal /|\
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 12:20 AM
I love the mystical quality of this poem, the symmetry and beauty. I have read it three times now and the more I read it the more I love it! Congratulations on your first placement WW! This is a fave for me. : )
Wolf Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 12:25 AM
You are very kind, Connie! Thank you and have a great day /|\
Dutta Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 11:22 PM
So Nice. Congrats White Wolf to win top
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 11:33 PM
Thank you so much, Anisha /|\
May Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 5:36 PM
Beautiful write WW...Congrats on your win
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 5:38 PM
Thank you kindly, Joseph /|\ Enjoy your day my friend
Allison Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 4:11 PM
You have some wonderful titles and that picture is awesome!!!!!! many congrats on your win:-) Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 4:20 PM
Isn't she talented? I love it! I take it this one placed? Haha! Thanks, Jan! Have a nice day on the Isle /|\
Smith Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 1:07 PM
Great job on this!! It's really good :)
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 1:43 PM
Thanks my friend! I got about one hour sleep and poetry came to me last night! Haha /|\
Ricci Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 2:37 PM
Hello White Wolf. I hope this day finds you well. You were on a roll with the moon. How grand is that very. I'm a believer in the moon and her power not to mention light. Your words describe all of that wonderfully and beautifully even in a perfect storm (lol). This is well executed in composition and construction. Keep dreaming and believing. Beautiful expression throughout. Good luck with the contest.
Wolf Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 2:44 PM
Thank you kindly, Lisa /|\
Sands Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 9:22 AM
This is so beautiful WW :)
Wolf Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 2:43 PM
Thank you, Heidi /|\
Robinson Jr. Avatar
June 9, 2017 at 12:21 PM
True lover's mystique this poem be, WW. Very romantic and well written. I love the form and lotus layering of this blossoming poem. Excellent write, my friend. Love how it begins and ends. Pure poetry. Love always.
Wolf Avatar
June 9, 2017 at 10:53 PM
Thank you, RW /|\
Roper Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 7:14 PM
Very well done, WW, good luck in the contest ~*
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 7:25 PM
Thank you, Eve /|\
Smith Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 9:28 AM
This a pure vision of de-light...terrfic
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 6:58 PM
This is the third time I've tried to reply! Thanks, Tim /|\
Downing  Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 8:29 AM
How can one not love this gorgeous yet magical piece. Fabulously done WW, just beautiful :)
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 6:54 PM
Thank you dear, Akkina /|\
Mccall Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 8:28 AM
What a beautiful poem so very well written good luck in the contest.
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 6:54 PM
Thank you so much, Edward /|\
May Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 7:44 AM
Nicely penned White Wolf
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Thank you, Joseph, enjoy your night/day /|\
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 6:36 AM
Very nice, White Wolf! Love the pic too!
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 6:38 AM
Yes, isn't it marvellous /|\
Green Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 6:21 AM
Really, really well done Rick. You have so many fantastic titles woven into this wonderful poem. It was a real Magical Mystery Tour for me.
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 6:24 AM
I just know you could craft a far better one with yours, Chris! /|\
Lane Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 2:41 AM
Well done, WW. I especially like these lines: "Fly like an eagle, Carry my soul, Unfold my heart
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 2:46 AM
Thank you kindly, Lin! Have a wonderful night/day /|\
White Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 12:42 AM
So beautiful Budgie. I love these short sentences and all the feels in it. Good luck in the contest.
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 12:46 AM
Thank you my friend /|\
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