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Forever Together

Ooooh. . . Ooooh. . . You know that I’d Cry if you died Don’t you see my love? You just can’t hide You can live your life And I’ll find mine But I will fight For you to stay alive Forever together Forever together Through good and bad weather Forever together You’re stuck with me Trust me, we’re meant to be Your heart is cold But mine is fierce and bold If you think I’m givin’ up You better think again We’re riding those teacups Over here in Disneyland Forever together (spinning, spinning) Happily ever after (Spinning, spinning) Through good and bad weather Together forever Forever together And I know that you’re blind To these childlike wonders But I won’t leave you behind To face alone the thunder If you don’t hang on now This life is gonna eat you The hare is gonna beat you This hatter’s gonna cheat you This hatter’s gonna cheat you Ooooh. . . Forever together (spinning, spinning) Happily ever after (Spinning, spinning) Forever together Forever together Forever together (spinning, spinning) Happily ever after (Spinning, spinning) Through good and bad weather Forever together Forever together You’ll get better So never say never! *This random song was part of a project on making a bad song. It was fun to write and play! ^__^

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/2/2016 12:14:00 AM

Sounds musical to me when read aloud ... now all you need is a tune and a singer. Not bad. I used to write lyrics before getting into poetry ... looking back it was kind of strange that I did since I have no hopes at all for being a singer, and putting words to music is beyond me. Never been to Disney Land (or world), but the Lagoon in Utah, I've had fun memories there. Let me know if it ever becomes a song and I'll give it a listen ... :)

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/2/2016 12:50:00 PM

Thank you very kindly! Putting words to music can be tricky for sure; a lot of people do it backwards - but music to words, which I find a little more difficult to do. My songwriting class I'm taking right now really helps with structure and creativity. The song has a tune and all, and simple chords. Not my best song, but hey, it was fun to write. ^^~Laura

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2016 7:30:00 PM

Laura, did you have fun writing these lines? I have few lyrics. Maybe more than a few. LOL... I like the tenderness and the sharing words. Glad I stopped by. LINDA

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/31/2016 8:37:00 PM

Yes, it was pretty fun! I will check out some of your lyrics soon! ^^ I'm glad you stopped by too, you are so cool! (: ~Laura

James Inman

Date: 3/31/2016 11:47:00 AM

Nice lyric Lauren. I work for Disney in Florida. I've ridden the teacups many times.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/31/2016 2:11:00 PM

I love the teacups! (: Great memories there. ~Laura

Dan Kearley

Date: 3/30/2016 11:46:00 PM

I don't think its that bad of a song? With the right singing, it would be just fine. :o)

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/31/2016 1:02:00 AM

Awww so sweet Dan. I love your uplifting visits~Laura