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Forever my love

Forever my love ~ Simple reminders of conscious belief Filter my mind midst the moon’s silver glow Satisfied truths sent to spell my relief All that my beating heart now needs to know Sensual visions to capture the feel Bringing the contours of wind sculpted plains Temptations cry out for all that is real Filling the void that I now can explain Cloudless these night skies of star sprinkled mist Shimmering soft on the eclipse of time Delicious the thoughts of your warm tender kiss Found in these endless illusions of rhyme Memories harbor the moments we live Photograph remnants we’re longing to share Telling the story of all it can give Building the dreams now worth capturing there Still we are standing alone on this eve Counting the stars in the heavens so bright Dreams can come true if we only believe Whispering prayers on this warm summer night Hear my desires a float on the breeze Finding their way to the one I adore Listen, my love, for I hope but to please Biding my time till you’re with me once more Down on my knees with my fingers entwined Solemn requests I now send up above Pleading with heaven to be ever kind Allowing this man to receive your sweet love All that I ask is now all that I need Merely the chance I may prove ever true You are my life and in that I believe Forever my love shall be only you Good night Soupers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/15/2019 4:04:00 PM
Rereading...Really love this.Always and Forever, !
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Chris Green
Date: 1/15/2019 4:11:00 PM
Thank you again Charmaine. It is so nice to see you around here again. You and your beautiful poetry have been missed.
Date: 1/3/2019 9:52:00 AM
Been a while since I've seen such a romantic poem, it's yearning to be true, a desperation raw in emotion, just how I like it. This is a fave for me Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/15/2019 4:11:00 PM
Thanks so very much John. Sorry for the late reply, I didn't see this
Date: 12/24/2018 2:39:00 PM
So stunning, what wonderful lines. The last stanza left me smiling, beautiful words Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/26/2018 10:30:00 AM
Thank you Iris. I am so happy you enjoyed this and you came away with a smile. :)
Date: 12/12/2018 12:49:00 PM
After reading this 3 times, I've decided I would like to steal it as a gift to my love - it is perfect, perfectly beautiful and romantic. I won't be a thief but an admirer I remain of the talent God gifted you with to share with us, and others. LOVE the poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2018 12:55:00 PM
Then my friend, you can have it if you like. It will be my gift to you. Thank you so much CayCay
Date: 12/12/2018 9:26:00 AM
Beautiful as ever Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2018 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Tim.
Date: 12/10/2018 8:14:00 AM
"Cloudless these night skies of star sprinkled mist," and "Down on my knees with my fingers entwined," those two lines are steeped so deeply with imagery that I could see you staring up at Heaven and praying that your love for her would be returned. Intoxicating is its plea, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2018 9:29:00 AM
Thanks so much Lin. It was written from an empty place in my heart that I long to be filled again. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 12/9/2018 2:50:00 PM
Always and Forever...An emotional poem...bleeding from the heart..I can 'feel' that.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2018 9:28:00 AM
Thank you Charmaine for always being so nice to me. It is so nice to see you again.
Date: 12/8/2018 2:45:00 PM
chris, how you romance this page is incredible!...i am in awe of your depth ( sweet) and wordcraft... huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2018 9:28:00 AM
Thank you Nette, coming from a talented poetess like yourself, that is a huge compliment
Date: 12/8/2018 11:07:00 AM
Chris, a beautifully penned poem by a talented writer, so many lovely lines, well done ~
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Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2018 9:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Dear Heart for your nice comment
Date: 12/8/2018 5:41:00 AM
Outstanding writing, inspiring verses dear friend, Chris ! admired it!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2018 9:27:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 12/7/2018 5:33:00 PM
Wow, Cloudless these night skies of star sprinkled mist. What a line! A beautifully smooth written poem. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2018 9:26:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi.