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Forever More Then...2-19-10

if you stop my heart from beating, will you breath me back to life, kiss the tears from my cheeks, one day call me your wife, if you steal my breath from my chest, and i fall into eternal sleep, promise me that youll kiss me, and that our love will always breath, burn it with the fire, so that it never ends, and even when my lifes breath is gone, we'll be more then friends

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Date: 10/7/2012 12:05:00 AM
I promise - J.A.B. %
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Date: 2/19/2010 4:08:00 PM
VERY INTRESTING POEM ...YOU ALMOST SOUND LIKE A FAIRY TALE . SNOW WHITE ..I LOVE THE KISS PART..ETERNAL SLEEP...IRMA
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Date: 2/19/2010 10:48:00 AM
Nice I loveeeee it. So cute.
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Date: 2/19/2010 10:46:00 AM
wow this is a really good poem it hit me hard i can stop reading it very good writtin very good keep it up
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