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Forever Love

If I was a drug Would you take me Would you enjoy the buzz I’d be giving Would you put me first In your veins like blood For me would you thirst And never get enough Would you sip me like wine Savor my juices so sweet Would you always have time For me kissing a treat Would you live for it This joy from up above Would your heart feel rich Would you forever love

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/15/2024 2:46:00 AM

A poem that excels in metaphors. Brilliant. Love that comes from God is important and essential.

Karen Jones
Date: 11/15/2024 3:03:00 AM

Amen Victor! Thanks for the kind compliment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/15/2024 2:13:00 AM

- He would become addicted and never make it without you, Karen :) - hugs

Karen Jones
Date: 11/15/2024 2:28:00 AM

Aw thank you sweetie!

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 11/15/2024 12:57:00 AM

Nicely penned. But you surely would be a life long addiction if tasted.

Karen Jones
Date: 11/15/2024 1:55:00 AM

lol A woman can dream! Thanks for reading.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/14/2024 5:03:00 AM

Dear Karen, What raw passion and daring metaphors. I think you've masterfully woven addiction and devotion into a potent elixir of emotion, challenging conventional expressions of love. Bravo for this bold, sensual exploration of love's intensity. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Karen Jones
Date: 11/14/2024 5:39:00 AM

I think one can be addicted to love or a lover. Thanks for reading with an open mind Daniel! Hugs