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Forever In Your Eyes

Fashioned by Your hand, for You I stand, Out of Your nostrils You blew the living breath that made me new Right well my soul knows, marvellous Your work shows Even deep down in the sea, Your right hand will hold me Verily this knowledge is high, to know that You are always nigh Enemies take Your name in vain, it gives me such grievous pain Risen up are they against You, but I hate them, it is true. I am the apple of Your eye, Your thoughts are precious towards I Nowhere can I hide from You, You are before and behind me too Yeah, the darkness cannot hide, for I am Your beloved child O God, You know my heart, let all wicked ways depart Unfathomable Your love for me, You made me wonderfully Reins all possessed by You, my love professed for You Eagerly this I will say, You know my every way Your eyes saw me unformed, Your love has me reformed Every part of my being has never left Your seeing Secretly covered in my mother's womb, I am wholly Yours till I reach the tomb. ---------------------------------------------- 20.7.16 (Psalms 139 inspired me to write this poem) For L Milton Hankins' "Your Personal Favourite" contest

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Date: 7/27/2016 4:13:00 AM
Congrats Jo, for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/24/2016 11:07:00 PM
Lovely, faithful piece, Jo, congrats! Viv x
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Date: 7/24/2016 5:04:00 PM
Jo, congratulations on your win for your poem in the 'forever in your eyes contest'! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/24/2016 4:44:00 PM
Jo, this is so beautiful because it can be romantic when it comes to the Lord. A lot of people don't understand how strong love is from God. He loves us more than anyone and I would love to gaze into his beautiful eyes, right? congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2016 10:20:00 AM
I understand how you feel, however, in scripture there are four classes of love, eros romantic love is never used in regard to God, does not mean we do not feel a deep attachment to him, we do, just it is spiritual, not carnal. Hope that clarifies my view.
Date: 7/24/2016 4:15:00 PM
Jo, congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat
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Date: 7/24/2016 12:23:00 PM
Beautiful write Jo, i could not pass this over and not place it, it is such a spiritual write, however I was looking for romantic thanks anyway!
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 7/27/2016 12:27:00 AM
Thank you John for my placement:) You're really kind:) I'm not good at romantic writes, actually was not going to enter this one but the contest was on for many days, so entered it:) Thank you once again:)
Date: 7/24/2016 8:59:00 AM
Hi Jo, This is a well written spiritual write expressing your love for your creator. Congratulations on you win.It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 7/21/2016 5:23:00 AM
So nicely written :) goodluck Jo
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