Jan Allison Poet Acrostic

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Forever In Your Eyes

Forever together, through good times and bad,
Our pledge to each other when we exchanged our vows.
Right from the moment we met I knew how special you were.
Even now I can’t believe you said YES on
Valentine’s Day when I proposed to YOU
Even though it wasn’t a Leap Year!
Romance was in the air for us on that special day.

I tell you every day that I love you with all my heart. 
Now we have just celebrated our Silver Anniversary.

You are the one I married, the man that I adore,
Our son is testament to our love for each other.
Understanding and listening to your partner is the
Recipe for success, along with a sprinkling of romance.

Even though we have seen difficult times recently
You have been my rock and without your
Emotional support I’d have struggled to get through.
So my darling, remember that I’ll be here for you until the day I die.

Forever in your eyes contest Sponsored by John Hamilton.

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Lynn Marie August 6, 2016 at 5:26 PM Your heart glows in this gorgeous write! The emotions are so touching, beginning with your trademark "whimsy" which always has me smiling! A beautiful love letter I feel honoured you share. Congratulations on your win; special congratulations on your most deserving happiness. blessings, lynn Jan Allison September 21, 2016 at 5:29 AM Thanks for the lovely comment Lynn sorry I didn't reply before I missed seeing it:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley July 24, 2016 at 11:00 PM Come on, Jan, stop reading the bloody blogs, stop congratulating, put your pen down, make a cup of tea and accept this congratulations, I haven't got all day x Jan Allison July 25, 2016 at 4:45 AM Am sitting here with a cuppa Mr Viv - me read blogs lol - i hardly had time to write yesterday lol - our 'collaboration' is 'best new poem lol I would prefer it was 'trending' or most popular favourited poem as it is far from my best lol but am so happy to share the top spot with so many others who contributed and the poem is still being added to:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight July 24, 2016 at 5:03 PM Jan, congratulations on your fine win for your poem in the 'forever in your eyes contest'! Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison July 25, 2016 at 4:45 AM Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars July 24, 2016 at 4:40 PM Jan, lovely acrostic... I proposed to Nick too! You have written such a great testimony on your love for your hubby lady, congrats on your placement :)-luloo Jan Allison July 25, 2016 at 4:45 AM Oh did you propose too Luloo:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A July 24, 2016 at 4:18 PM Hi, Jan congratulations on your 'Forever in your eyes' win. Love Skat Jan Allison July 24, 2016 at 4:20 PM Many thanks Skat - I can't keep up with contest congrats and writing and I have been preoccupied reading the blogs today lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. July 24, 2016 at 9:27 AM Hi Jan, Congrats on a wonderful marriage !And congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Jan Allison July 24, 2016 at 3:02 PM Many thanks Alexis:-) I am very lucky to have my hubby by my side during good times and bad especially over the last 3 years which have been so so trying:-( hugs Jan xx

Jesse Zerlaut July 22, 2016 at 1:31 AM beautiful Jan, It's pure and speaks of a very good marriage. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest! Jan Allison July 22, 2016 at 4:28 AM Thanks Jesse - my hubby and I have been on a rollercoaster of a rides since his cancer surgery in 2013 and it was then I wrote my very first poem - its been my lifeline helping me through the worst period of my life - my hubby is special and I am blessed to have him and my amazing son:-) hugs Jan xx

Wendy Rycroft July 16, 2016 at 4:31 AM Beautiful words and well written x Jan Allison July 16, 2016 at 11:44 AM Thanks Wendy:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel July 14, 2016 at 8:31 AM Lovely to read this, Jan:) All the best for the contest:) Jan Allison July 14, 2016 at 8:48 AM Thanks Jo:-) hugs jan xx

Meenakshi Raina July 13, 2016 at 11:41 PM A beautiful poem... filled with your lovely sentiments...thanks Jan for visiting my page and leaving your comments... Jan Allison July 14, 2016 at 2:20 AM Thanks Meenakshi:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley July 13, 2016 at 10:48 PM Congrats on your silver anniversary, Jan, and on a worthy write- I know you mean every line. Viv x Jan Allison July 14, 2016 at 2:20 AM Thanks Viv - we all need somebody to love:-)hugs jan xx

Tim Smith July 13, 2016 at 8:04 PM Congrats on your Anniversary Jan. You and Bob seem like a great match. Jan Allison July 14, 2016 at 2:19 AM After 27 years we are still together Tim, as you know its been a tough few years for me personally and Bob has been with me every step of the way:-) hugs jan xx

Holly Bohto July 13, 2016 at 7:20 PM Jan thanks for your beauty. I know I have so much more to offer and your poetry and encouragement today has helped me see that even when we write with the flatness of depression in our souls that Beauty in writing will shine like yours if we hold on for the brighter day. Thank you for sharing your brighter day with me. Jan Allison July 14, 2016 at 2:18 AM Keep on writing Holly and get your feelings down on paper I don't know how I'd have got through the last 3 years without it :-) hugs janxx

Judy Konos July 13, 2016 at 6:21 PM Simply brilliant! WOW Jan Allison July 14, 2016 at 2:17 AM Thanks Judy lovely to see you my friend have missed you:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich July 13, 2016 at 5:09 PM what a wonderful tribute to your GOOD man, Jan. Hold on to him. He's a keeper. Jan Allison July 13, 2016 at 5:12 PM I intend to Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Savanah Hester July 13, 2016 at 3:36 PM Beautifully written, I loved this poem Jan Allison July 13, 2016 at 3:38 PM Thanks Savanah:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray July 13, 2016 at 2:50 PM AW....lucky you Jan. I also proposed to my husband....and we know how THAT turned out! Best of luck in the contest. Jan Allison July 13, 2016 at 2:59 PM aww Jean but you have your wonderful family so something amazing came out the the relationship:-) hugs Jan xx

Wendy Rycroft July 13, 2016 at 1:51 PM A very lovely romantic well written poem xxx Jan Allison July 13, 2016 at 1:54 PM Thanks Wendy:-) I struggle to write romantic lines but thought I would give the contest a whirl:-) hugs jan xx

DM Babbit July 13, 2016 at 1:39 PM I've always believed that love lasts forever, if not, then it truly never was. Jan Allison July 13, 2016 at 1:50 PM I think you have good point there DM:-) hugs Jan x

Demetrios Trifiatis July 13, 2016 at 10:33 AM A monument of love, romance and devotion dear, Jan, wonderfully erected! Good luck! Jan Allison July 13, 2016 at 11:28 AM Thanks Demetrios :-) we have an unwritten contract for 50 years with an option to renew for a further 50 lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman July 13, 2016 at 9:12 AM Love your romantic down to earth poem Jan, Happy 25th and good luck in the contest!:) Jan Allison July 13, 2016 at 9:16 AM Thanks Cheryl we celebrated our silver anniversary in June so we must be doing something right - even though he's never given me roses in 27 years together I still love him to bits lol:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y. July 13, 2016 at 9:10 AM Hi Jan, You have a penned a good romantic piece.Best of luck in the contest. A Big seven:-) Alexis Jan Allison July 13, 2016 at 9:15 AM I'm not good at romantic lines Alexis but did my best with this one - its true I did propose to my hubby though so I must be a bit romantic lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Madhupriya Shanmugam July 13, 2016 at 8:51 AM Good one Jan..good luck :) Jan Allison July 13, 2016 at 8:52 AM Thanks Madhurpriya I hope you give the contests a go:-) hugs Jan xx