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Forever in your Eyes

Forgive me my beloved, if I love you too much,
obdurate emotions yearn for your tender touch.
Remembering the time I first heard your voice,
excited senses were intoxicated without a choice.
Vulnerable hearts merged to feel spiritually akin,
enraptured souls danced in delight from within.
Reciting romantic revelations like a mandolin.

Infatuated eyes adore the majesty of your grace,
nothing can compare to the silkiness of your face.

You ignite passions that burn like a flamboyant fire,
only you hold the key to unlock my devotional desire.
Unalterable sensations keep flowing through my veins,
rare, radiant, ravishing rose you soothe all my pains.

Every beat of my heart is a constant echo of your name,
you are my sacred soul mate and amaranthine twin flame.
ever since we connected my words are clearer in definition,
sheltering our unique love is now my sole eternal mission
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 1/14/2024 5:25:00 AM
Silent Silent Silent. Good Morning. I bow to your skilled and extraordinary writing and poetic talent. Please allow me to let this entry and your execution stand. There is nothing I could ad or say and my words would diminish your entry. Truly. This is extraordinary and I feel honored to have read seen and felt your entry in its entirety. I love the title to which you did not stray and the acrostic format flowed with ease. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
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Date: 12/11/2023 10:50:00 AM
Beautiful and Romantic..You never cease to amaze us.
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Date: 12/10/2023 7:35:00 AM
Beyond beauteous acrostic, Silent One. It is so very enchanting. Lovely UK Sunday to you. ~
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Date: 12/8/2023 5:01:00 PM
A beautifully written lovely poem! I am sure she loved this...
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Date: 12/8/2023 4:54:00 PM
A rhyming Acrostic, well done, Silent One. Another love poem filled with depth, love and emotions. One of the best written Acrostic poems I've ever read. Bill
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Date: 12/8/2023 3:06:00 AM
Wow, this is such a lovely acrostic poem for the beloved! It's hued with all magical textures of love, loyalty and romantic aura, whilst weaving heartfelt emotions.. "Reciting romantic revelations like a mandolin", "nothing can compare to the silkiness of your face" Such elegant descriptions and such softness in your words.. Ahh, this feels heavenly! "rare, radiant, ravishing rose you soothe all my pains" A love which is cathartic and therapeutic, I think it's a treasure to find! Beautiful poem
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Date: 12/7/2023 9:42:00 PM
Have you found your twin? Another amazing poem on a subject I know too well. Your beloved is lucky.
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Date: 12/7/2023 5:41:00 PM
An emotional and romantic Acrostic my friend. Loved the line 'Every beat of my heart is a constant echo of your name'.
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Date: 12/7/2023 1:00:00 PM
very romantic, Silent One. I do like a well written acrostic that is also rhymed!
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Date: 12/7/2023 9:36:00 AM
Beautiful acrostic, love like this exists in poetic pages in various forms, and it makes one believe in love, thats what words can do, can do so so much more than one can imagine, words like ths i guess can capture many hearts and make so many fall in love with love! I love the opening line the most and the rest just flows in eloquence as always, you truly are gifted poet. Your words do touch many souls, so its good you use them in a soulful manner: pleasure reading this. Sending you light
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Date: 12/7/2023 7:21:00 AM
Mesmerizing depths nurturing impetuous desires. Beautifully formatted Acrostic Form and photo, Silent One. Aloha, William
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Date: 12/7/2023 6:52:00 AM
Verses of passion, SO. Beautifully romantic!
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Date: 12/7/2023 6:23:00 AM
Twin flame is the perfect combination of love. Alike, half of your soul, I hope your happiness endures forever.
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Date: 12/7/2023 5:09:00 AM
"Every beat of my heart is a constant echo of your name, you are my sacred soul mate and amaranthine twin flame." What an intense expression of romantic emotions and what a lovely song of love. Who is that 'ravishing rose who soothes all your pains" (?) :) So Lovely, Silent one.
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