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Forever In a House With a Thousand Rooms

Muse #1 - Louis Carrol wrote - Alice, "How long is forever" Rabbit, "Sometimes just one second". Muse #2 - The house with a thousand rooms FOREVER IN A HOUSE WITH A THOUSAND ROOMS The house with a thousand rooms, reflecting doors, and by the way, ceilings, floors and walls. Even as Alice falls, “skedaddling” as the long-eared rabbit recalls, “Oh my!” “How long is forever and forever is for how long? Just one second...here she,” he barely exhales as one thousand rooms shatter, “Oh this Alice, always getting in trouble!” “Did I mention there’s mouse holes, and the king is not amused. He was in the middle of eating a huge morsel of cheddar when - kaboom - earth shattering, ear splitting monsoon of reflective shards… His minions survey the damage. Mirrors toppled on mirrors, “Who’s going to pay?!” Alice trembles - she dislikes mice — fearsome, larger than life with their itty bitty tails and teeth - she wants to climb on table. Half past a second I show her my hole. She leaves in a hurry, poor little girl.” 1/28/2020 I wrote each line with 10 syllables The Meld of Muses Poetry Contest Sponsor: Craig Cornish

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Date: 1/28/2020 4:49:00 PM
This was really creative and fun to read Kim. Wonderfully written. Best wishes in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 4:50:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/28/2020 4:24:00 PM
I feel like "Gershon in Wonderland' reading this delightful poem. Great entry for the contest! Thanks, Kim ~ Brains-scattered
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 4:39:00 PM
LOL! Watch out for the mouse king ;)

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