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Forever Fireworks

instant attraction sharing winks and smiles together could this be love at first sight? the first date went well will the fireworks last forever? happy fiftieth my love Ni (2) Katuata Poetry Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula 7/12/2021

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 7/12/2021 7:01:00 PM

Catchy little diddy - I really enjoyed the bang at the end. Good on you, you gave your haiku substance. I'm sure this will fare well in the contest. All the best ... CayCay (diddy may not be a word, but, to me, it fits)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/12/2021 5:26:00 PM

Looks like it, Charles! :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/12/2021 5:11:00 PM

My dear friend, your gifted pen spills with a lifetime of romance in six short-but-sweet lines! Such a beautiful piece of forever love. Simply superb, Charlie, but of course, you always deliver nothing less :)) Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/12/2021 3:56:00 PM

Hello Charles messina, wow! you know not many couples make it that far in a marriage. Enjoy your evening my friend.