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Forever Faithful

Merciful and loving Father, Thank You for forgiving my faults and flaws and fortifying me with the favor of Your friendship. I fervently vow to You, my fidelity and loyalty. I will be Your faithful servant forever, for You are my fortress in times of great fear. Sovereign Shepherd, You offered Your firstborn Son as a sacrificial savior for the sins of mankind. I will follow in His footsteps, forgiving others as You so frequently save me from my failings. My Divine Father, my Friend, my God, I'm fond of feasting on the fine fruits of the Holy words offered to Your fold... the fealty of Your devout flock, and I face my future with forbearance, as prophecies are being fulfilled. September 1, 2020 Alliteration Regarding Relationship with God Sponsored by: Beata Augustin

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Date: 9/29/2020 9:44:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this poetic expression of your faith in God. Indeed, my divine nature shouts "Wow" to this testimony of yours, echoing your vibrant and sweet relationship with the Lord. Your address to the Almighty as your personal Father, Saviour and Friend gives reverberating joy to the spirit. God bless you.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/13/2020 4:32:00 AM
Thank you for honoring my poem with a placement in your contest, Beata. It's always a pleasure to give Him praise.
Date: 9/29/2020 10:14:00 AM
A beautiful prayer, Jenna. "Feasting on the fine fruits of the Holy Words," a beautiful image among so many beautiful images. Congratulations on your first place win. Many blessings to you.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/13/2020 4:31:00 AM
Thanks ever so much for your thoughts, Sam.
Date: 9/29/2020 9:03:00 AM
Yes, our shepherd, our Father, our friend. This is a wonderful testimonial poem. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/13/2020 4:30:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind words, Carol.
Date: 9/29/2020 8:03:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful Jenna. So skillfully written-uplifting and inspirational piece of work. Congratulations on top win! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/13/2020 4:30:00 AM
I'm glad you found it inspirational, Linda. Thank you.
Date: 9/2/2020 4:21:00 AM
A wonderful way to start my day with this beautiful prayer, Jenna, your poetic talents shine. Hugs, John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/2/2020 6:13:00 AM
I'm delighted to have your day begin with my words, John. Thanks!
Date: 9/2/2020 4:16:00 AM
What a beautiful prayer Jenna! Great Job!!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/2/2020 6:12:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Mark.
Date: 9/2/2020 1:02:00 AM
Reads like a beautiful prayer Jenna, your faith in God shines through in your verse. Good luck Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/2/2020 6:11:00 AM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, as you always provide, Tom.
Date: 9/2/2020 12:18:00 AM
The fact that you consider your Father, (Our Father) is an act of a good Daughter. A good soul speaks these words. A lady I would like to envision taking her place next to a Saint Philomena or Germaine Cousins, maybe getting to hold the cloak of The Mother, as a child once again, processioning down a Great Hall, the birds singing...eyes bulging, feathered chests pounding with great joy having learned to fly. God Bless The Good Sisters and Daughters. True Beauty.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/2/2020 6:11:00 AM
I hope I never give Him a reason to question my love for Him. Writing these lines was good for my soul. Thanks, Jude.
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Jude Herrick
Date: 9/2/2020 12:27:00 AM
Sometimes a poem can do more for the soul than a 1000 sunsets and a 1000 Dawn's.
Date: 9/1/2020 11:19:00 PM
A humble and God-honoring prayer and summary of faith in him. Enjoyed your alliterations, Jenna, you clearly put a lot of thought into your word selection and crafted your lines so they flow well and carry much meaning. Best wishes to you ~ John
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John Watt
Date: 9/4/2020 5:06:00 PM
I'm glad you did, Jenna. I look forward to reading more in this vein.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/2/2020 6:09:00 AM
Thank you for your generous comments and best wishes in the contest, John. It was a chance to express the depth of my faith.
Date: 9/1/2020 7:50:00 PM
This is just so well-penned. It's a true paean to prayer and penitence... Here's to a winner in the contest, Jenna. Faith and Good Fortune, Gershon
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/2/2020 6:08:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Gershon.
Date: 9/1/2020 7:14:00 PM
Amazing write Jenna, probably just what the sponsor is looking for. A touching and deeply personal write thanks for sharing, your alliteration is off the charts great! Another winner!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/1/2020 7:20:00 PM
Your thoughts and compliments always make me smile, John. You so generously honor my poetry. Thank you.

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