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This is not about voodoo as we think of it. it does not involve sticking needles! That is an extreme form! Here the young girl is desperately in love and does not want to lose the man she loves! He is teasing her!

you so amuse me , you do! with your belief in voodoo, stitching two toys together, will not bond us forever, two leaves in fold of a page, will not stop love disengage, but when our two hearts are true, they stick with no special glue! you trap my legs with ankles, grasp me, tight arms with bangles, night will not steal me away, still be here in bright of day! I will tell what I adore, so from now on doubt no more, those dark black eyes when I see, when longingly look at me, sensuous smile you bring on, cheers me more than any dawn, beat of your heart against mine, is paradise I define, love’s rock is its purity, worst enemy~vanity, For ever I shall love you, till my last breath will be true, so my darling believe me, as I ask you on my knee, marry me to be with you, our true love needs no voodoo!! ‘From the heart’ poetry contest Sponsor Regina McIntosh written 19/10/2020 couplets 7 syllables each line

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Date: 10/20/2020 10:44:00 AM
Hope there isnt a doll made in your likeness Krish, I can see the pins in your head yikes. Good luck Tom
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Date: 10/20/2020 1:49:00 PM
no pins! Thanks! This lady is deeply in love and fears she will lose her love! He is just reassuring! no actual Voodoo!!:)

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