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When I first talked to him I fell in love He seemed like someone I couldn't live without A few short days later He asked me out He knew we couldn't be together But we didn't care People always say that long-distance never works But we still love each other no matter where He is perfectly amazing We've only been together awhile But no matter what He always makes me smile Our love grows everyday We may not be able to be together But I hope we will love each other Forever I don't know if I should show this to my boyfriend or not. If y'all could give me some feedback on if I should or not I would really appreciate it. Thank you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/7/2011 11:14:00 AM
When I welcomed you to PoetrySoup I hoped that you would continue your writing and share it with us. Today I am asking you to please continue your poetry writing. Just write what is in your heart as that is where the best poetry comes from. I will stop back soon and hope to be able to read some new poetry from you at that time Jessica. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2011 12:30:00 PM
Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Jessica. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend and that you find miles of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2011 12:09:00 PM
definately you should... but 'stop' .....if you think he is too much of a joke crackoes... drop the idea .. still.. beautiful poem
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