Forever

When I first talked to him I fell in love
He seemed like someone I couldn't live without 
A few short days later
He asked me out 

He knew we couldn't be together 
But we didn't care 
People always say that long-distance never works 
But we still love each other no matter where 

He is perfectly amazing 
We've only been together awhile 
But no matter what 
He always makes me smile 

Our love grows everyday 
We may not be able to be together 
But I hope we will love each other 
Forever 


I don't know if I should show this to my boyfriend or not. If y'all could give me some 
feedback on if I should or not I would really appreciate it. Thank you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 7, 2011 at 11:14 AM
When I welcomed you to PoetrySoup I hoped that you would continue your writing and share it with us. Today I am asking you to please continue your poetry writing. Just write what is in your heart as that is where the best poetry comes from. I will stop back soon and hope to be able to read some new poetry from you at that time Jessica. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 12:30 PM
Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Jessica. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend and that you find miles of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
Singh Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 12:09 PM
definately you should... but 'stop' .....if you think he is too much of a joke crackoes... drop the idea .. still.. beautiful poem
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