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Forever

I wished my sweetheart to love only me life long Forever he vowed as his lips found mine Forever arrived just last week Broke vow broke my heart ... forever ... CayCay May 20, 2019

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/10/2019 6:53:00 PM

Hello Cay-Cay, that was not true love. One day you will find true love. have a nice evening my friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/26/2019 9:45:00 PM

Nicely done CayCay, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/25/2019 1:48:00 PM

- Congratulations on your touching suggestions, CayCay - ... a fun contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/25/2019 1:14:00 PM

Back for congrats!

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/25/2019 12:04:00 PM

So beautiful are your tender words being expressed CayCay and my congratulations, Aloha wk

Charles Messina

Date: 5/25/2019 7:35:00 AM

I think most of us have experienced this sometime in our lives. This was so sad when I read it. Great touching write CayCay. Congratulations on your 1st place win. ~Charlie

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/25/2019 1:41:00 AM

A long overdue visit to my dear friend - all your poems are a or should be wins! the thought, imagination and and soulful effort you put into them, never ceases to amaze me CayCay. Forever he vowed, but forever was last week when he broke his vow - intense and sad! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/21/2019 1:40:00 PM

Yup! Back in college a guy gave me a mushy Valentine card then broke up with me...talk about contrasts! Guess what?! I met my husband on the following Valentine’s Day so all is good!

P.S. Awtry

Date: 5/20/2019 11:13:00 PM

This is a great entry for the contest, CayCay. "forever arrived just last week"--gold!