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...inspired by T.S. Eliot ****** l The evening rumbles in and grumbles, tea is served, the kettle whistles, bread is buttered, weary workers settle, nibble, drink their tea and chatter, as the platter's passed around and cakes are proffered in the cozy parlour, lamp-lit, rum is offered, daily bread, and thankful for it. Curtains closed against the weather, children say their prayers together, snug and safe now, sisters, brothers. ll The morning sun prods sleepyheads to service and to play, the colliery beckons and the women make the beds. The cobbled backstreets glisten from the rain the night before. The siren calls and all the miners listen, they heed its strident roar and step into their coveralls. lll You take fresh linens from the chest, it's time to straighten up the nest, then gargle, and repair your face to meet the challenges and woes, you hold your children to your breast and wonder how by heaven's grace you'll pay the rent, afford the food, as praying to the Lord you stand and shiver, arms and legs are shaking, all a'quiver, a dreadful vision haunts your eyes, the poor house, shameful to conceive, you lie upon the bed and weep, how will you cope, how will you sleep? no items left to compromise, a constant struggle to believe. lV He wrestles with his conscience, tried and troubled, thoughts of fraud and theft beset him constantly, he's torn, his sickened heart is worn, bereft. He looks into the eyes of strangers, each consumed with his own fears, distraught, and never satisfied, into a world of want stillborn, condemned to worry all these years. We suffer with these souls who struggle through a life of toil and grief, tread-milled with no hope of cheer or expectation of relief.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/8/2016 3:58:00 PM
keith - your use of language is absolutely masterful and it literally jumps off the page in this poem. i love the way you play with alliteration and rhyme in a way i rarely get to see. it's a privilege to read your work...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/8/2016 4:40:00 PM
You are most kind! a tribute to Mr T.S. Eliot, a poet from generations ago when I wish I was a young man and could properly appreciate his style and workmanship. The same could be said of W.H. Auden, Hart Crane, Dylan Thomas, W.B. Yeats and others of that time and space. I really should have been born 100 years ago!!! Thanks Ilene... Best wishes, Keith
Date: 2/8/2016 3:30:00 PM
Keith my friend these words hold my tears. Thank you my friend. Peace and many blessings to you and yous.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/8/2016 4:45:00 PM
Thank you Steve... you kind words mean so much to me. Best wishes. Keith
Date: 2/8/2016 2:56:00 PM
This is a pure gem of a poem. Showing the hardships and worry of some who struggle through life. love phyl
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/8/2016 2:59:00 PM
Bless you Phyl! I am so grateful for your delightful remarks! Best wishes, Keith

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