Foreboding

Death burns 
holes in my mortal heart—
I am not opposed to it 
yet I detest how it looms over 
everything and everyone 
I love. 

How I cringe 
thinking about how 
in this lifetime I will 
face more absences,
more voids, more tears.

It is the 
foreboding of 
a storm—the clouds 
form gradually, making 
you so very alive and 
so very aware— 
yet you do not feel 
the true impact of
the blow until
it rains. 


6.14.22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Beaufort Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 3:30 PM
Wonderful Laura. I am now 71 and having more health issues this year. I think I should be around for a while, but there are no guarantees for me. We see people get sick and die. I don't think death will be so bad for me--it's like going to sleep...it's more difficult for those we leave behind, and I will feel bad that I won't be able to help the people I love and my own children. Life is a limited thing and we all must leave at the appropriate time. It's so sad, as you point out above.
Breidenthal Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 2:12 PM
Sorry to hear about the health issues. You are always in my thoughts. Life is a limited thing- well out and very true. Death is something that is constantly on my mind, for better or for worse. But you’re right - it is really more about what we will leave behind that makes it sad. ~Laura
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December 4, 2022 at 7:48 AM
Love your writing there is so much thought and depth that goes into your poems, pure brilliance
Breidenthal Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 2:09 PM
Stephen — thank you. I feel honored to connect with you. Much love, Laura
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