Forbidden Love

Dine a la carte
with my secret sweetheart
a half dozen roses
in differing poses
champagne glass in hand
soft notes from the band

vows ever after
sweet smiles and laughter


eyes locked in stare
romance in the air
emotions a-brew
old blending with new
eyelids a-fluttering
to whispered sweet nothings

vows ever after
sweet smiles and laughter

Love ballad dancing
and sensuous prancing
a oneness of feeling
and merging of being
open-eyed nose-meet
wings on the feet

vows ever after
sweet smiles and laughter

Instead we are pained
to outsiders chained
with emptiness fraught
our love counts for naught 
mere love poems writ
twixt two lovers smit’

no vows ever after
sweet smiles or laughter

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Lamoureux Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 8:56 AM
This is a sad one.
Seal Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 6:46 PM
Nothing worse than being smit when your chained. It's still a fantastic write Licia, Take care, Richard
Seal Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 6:46 PM
Ahh you return, I have just seen your smile in the pic parade Licia and had to come and say welcome back. Now, this poem is a corker, You led me on with this right to the end, and those last two lines are crushing. Great write. Take care, Richard.
A  Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 2:34 PM
Hi Delysia,, CONGRATS on your romantic win! ;-) ~SKAT~
Maverick Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations Delysia..super well done on the winning placement Joe..'
A   Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 10:03 AM
Delysia, , CONGRATULATIONS :-)* Thank you for the nice and sweet romantic poem... pin points the watering passion thirst I seek. Always & Forever..... PD
Morrison Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 5:02 AM
What a marvelously moving piece! Kim
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 7:43 PM
wow, this is great but I see no congrats on it, didn't it get on the list?? I was really happy to find it because I think I have seen nearly all your poems, sweetie. On this one, I really love how you ended the poem too.
Manassian Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 1:04 PM
This is awesome and sad. I'm faving this, my dear. I don't know how you managed to take us from the scene of true love to the harsh reality of forbidden love with such a beautiful rhythm. Just like the dance you were writing about. Life! Lovely, my dear...lovely write. BTW...thanks for going through my pics and for the lovely comment about my daughter. Of course, I agree, but then I am biased! :)
Paul Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 10:05 AM
AMAZING..:)
Johnson Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 3:34 AM
very bloody frigate good(almost swear word) the taste of love is understood, and it flows very well love it babe ...u did well come out of the corner:) xo Don
Dey Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 11:05 PM
heart catching imagery...loved it dear!
Johnson Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 3:15 PM
Congratulations on your win in this fun contest. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 3:15 PM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of paula, delysia
Sweetheart Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 1:17 PM
Congrats delysia on your HM in Paula's contest with this excellent entry luv.. enjoy your very special honor...
Brown Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 1:12 PM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Delysia. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 1:07 PM
Congrats, delysia. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
Devonshire Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 9:51 AM
Well done, Delysia. Congratulations on your success in Paula's contest! Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 11:58 AM
This is quite a stunning piece Delysia, hope your weekend has been a good one.. try and stay warm with the few cold days they are forecasting for us in CT :) Good luck for the contest ;)
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 5:54 PM
Wow this is amazing. you can't keep me in suspense I need more Wow
Fraser Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 7:05 AM
Wonderful read Delysia, most enjoyable. Keep them coming. Have a lovely weekend....:)
A   Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 1:10 AM
D, very passionate... thanks for sharing,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 11:18 AM
Thank you for sharing your fabulous poetry today Delysia. It was a very interesting piece to read. Love, Carol
Cohan Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 10:49 AM
I THINK THE REST OF US ARE IN A LARGE ENOUGH NUMBER TO SUE HER IN A CLASS ACTION SUIT FOR MENTAL DISTRESS-CUZ SHE MAKES SO MANY OF US LOOK BAD~HON, SPOILIT MISAKE, CHANGE B4 BEING PUBLISHED. "DRIPPING LOVE GLOW" WHAT IS THAT, IT MAKES NO SENSE UNLESS YOU'VE LOVED, REALLY LOVED. AND TO END WITH SMIT INSTEAD OF SMITTEN WAS so u ...SO U CAN NOW TELL EVERYONE U have free cee's aproval I SPOSTED THIS AS I DID ANOTHER SUPER POET BECAUSE PEOPLE HAVE A RIGHT TO KNOW..fondly, your friend, ~free cee!~
Johnson Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 10:39 AM
Too bad this is an illicit romance it sounds so wonderful. Nice to hear from you and glad I found you. I will be reading more. Love, Joyce
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