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FORBIDDEN

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FORBIDDEN

~ZOMBIE NIGHT~ 

WHINING WHISPERS MOVE ACROSS FORBIDDEN LAND
Rugged ruins crumble silent through the night
Echoes of the dead roam the air
Moonlight vanishes to complete despair
Bones slowly desert distorted resting homes
Ascension of the dead -Longing to live again 

Sands of desert flip the hour glass back
WHIMPERING WHISPERS MOVE ACROSS FORBIDDEN LAND
Rugged ruins crumble silent through the night
Echoes of the dead roam the air
Moonlight vanishes to complete despair
Bones slowly desert distorted resting homes 

Taking light from where evil stays 
Feeding away leaving behind a death valley zone
WONDERING WHISPERS MOVE ACROSS FORBIDDEN LAND
Rugged ruins crumble silent through the night
Echoes of the dead roam the air
Moonlight vanishes to complete despair

Dead souls forsake the common land
Shadowing like Equinox light 
Walking corpse covered in rotten barren sand
WINDY WHISPERS MOVE ACROSS FORBIDDEN LAND 
Rugged ruins crumble silent through the night
Echoes of the dead roam the air

Upright, forward broken taboo 
Searching for the perfect breath of fresh air
Sounds of symbols march the ground
Searching to find their missing heartbeat
WHISKING WHISPERS MOVE ACROSS FORBIDDEN LAND
Rugged ruins crumble silent through the night


Ascension of the dead  -Long to live again 
Bones slowly desert distorted resting home
Moonlight vanishing in complete despair
Echoes of the dead roam the air
Rugged ruins crumble silent through the night
WHEN WHISPERS MOVE ACROSS FORBIDDEN LAND

by;PD

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 7/14/2016 2:20:00 AM
Nice poem
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Date: 5/22/2016 10:49:00 AM
I like the repetition, ascending or descending, which ever way from you look at it. "And whining whispers move across forbidden land" on its own stands out and stands alone as it flows very well.
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Date: 5/10/2016 2:55:00 PM
Enjoyed reading love your use of works to describe happenings....
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Date: 4/23/2016 6:27:00 PM
I really enjoyed this...it is a story of many tales your words take roads that few date take...it is dark and beautiful, loving and sad. You have mad skill with ink and quill
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Date: 10/17/2015 10:04:00 AM
Beautiful repetition
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Date: 3/17/2015 1:50:00 AM
wow such a dark and haunting poem but also so beautiful. I love it XD
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Date: 11/22/2014 6:13:00 AM
BRAVO!! I love this poem.. It is so my type .. I would marry it if I could .. Serious though, it is very very good.. It seems it could fit right in to some older Neurosis lyrics.. (coming from me, that is high praise) THANKS FOR BEING CREATIVE AND SHARING YOUR ART WITH ME. I will definitely come back and read this again. Joel
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Date: 10/10/2014 1:09:00 AM
beautiful
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Date: 7/3/2014 12:17:00 PM
You describe your zombie night with dark imagery and haunting words. Excellent work, Linda! // I like the technical build-up of the stanzas where repetition and rotation are expertly used. rating=7 // paul
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Date: 7/3/2014 8:50:00 AM
so sad but well written it really reflects the scenario,thanks for this...emer
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Date: 5/23/2014 1:43:00 AM
Holy smokes. Your vocabulary surpasses mine, and that's a painful thing to admit lol This poem is amazing, but also delightfully depressing. I DO NOT LIKE the way the elderly are discarded in our country. Bravo for an outstanding write, Linda. I know better than to ever challenge you at a free-verse. Amazing sillz, my sweet...xox...Mel :)
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Date: 5/21/2014 9:32:00 AM
Amazing Alliteration in the title my friend! I hope your happiness never ends. In writing compositions that gain you positions in finding a beautiful life. Cheeers!!! Your Poetry Pal!
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Date: 4/21/2014 4:53:00 PM
So sad yet so moving on how the zombies are looking and searching for a place to find themselves once again... Nice free verse :)
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Date: 1/22/2014 8:03:00 PM
I am started to feel sick again,they told me i could get the phoniama back again i've tryed to listen to the doc but i always end up outside or in a cold place it's not easy to stay warm where i am. about lizze loved her haunting story, the stone it was a vision of death and life a balance i guess. cheri
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Date: 1/3/2014 11:38:00 PM
Adore your imagery. It said 'forbidden' and so here I am haha is this meant to be a song by any chance. I read it with a beat in my chest. Looking forward to reading more. ~ Sam
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Date: 12/23/2013 11:42:00 AM
excellent one
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Date: 12/20/2013 5:56:00 PM
Wow! Incredible write xo Jon
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Date: 12/20/2013 1:08:00 AM
Loved this one! Thanks for your words! Great contest always. Thoubert
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Date: 11/23/2013 4:31:00 AM
excellent and scary pen Linda (I love the hat) congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/22/2013 9:08:00 PM
Woa...I'm completely dumbfounded, stupified and mystified with what might be the kewlest night of the whispering, walking dead poem I've ever read. It's well...eerily inviting to my mesmerized soul. PS: Stop reading my stuff you're compliments are killing me:) Terry
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Date: 11/22/2013 12:40:00 PM
I love this style. Congrats, Linda!
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Date: 11/21/2013 4:20:00 PM
Nice win Linda, You know I love this poem.... Roger
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Date: 11/21/2013 4:38:00 AM
congratulations Linda love xx
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Date: 11/20/2013 10:04:00 PM
An outstanding poem, Linda! Of all the zombie poems in this contest, this one was the most elegantly written. If you can consider zombies as being elegant? Congratulations on your well deserved win!...Many thanks for the kind congrats on my poems! :)
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Date: 11/20/2013 6:20:00 PM
Oh the poor pathetic Zombies. I wish they could just settle down and be at peace. congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce
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