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For You Are My Great Escape

Gently and softly, you tease me that way- Resonating chills down my spine lead to Enchanted fields where we become one. Attraction becoming an ineffable distraction, Taking me higher as we make our great escape. Eternal haven where we can be intimate, Soft sentiments of silk seem to shine- Crepuscular nights of splendor with thee, Awaiting the touch you crave from me. Perpetual truth that my affection wears Ethereal wings (flying to you forever) ~ January 8, 2020 Great Escape Poetry Contest John Hamilton

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Date: 1/15/2020 11:46:00 PM
Romantic escape..Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem Lu Loo..
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Date: 1/15/2020 7:00:00 PM
beautifully romantic Lu Loo... congratulations on your win...:) hugd
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Date: 1/15/2020 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your romantic acrostic winning second placement Luloo. xxoo
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Date: 1/15/2020 2:13:00 PM
Crepuscular nights of splendor...well you got me with that line, a wonderful write completely disguising it is an acrostic, just what I was hoping for, congrats and thanks for entering Laura!
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Date: 1/9/2020 7:27:00 AM
An intimate escape with the one you love sounds like a good idea. Well written, Laura.
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Date: 1/9/2020 12:17:00 PM
thank you lovely Lin, nice to hear from you, Happy New Year! x:-)-luloo
Date: 1/9/2020 5:22:00 AM
"Taking me higher as we make our great escape." This is where my heart stopped and said "OH!"
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Date: 1/9/2020 12:17:00 PM
many thanks caring Caren, (I love nicknames lol) the sweetest are you...x:-)-luloo
Date: 1/8/2020 8:33:00 PM
Nicely done, Laura, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/8/2020 6:37:00 PM
A very beautiful romantic acrostic Luloo. This should become a top winner. xxoo
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/9/2020 12:16:00 PM
thank you sweet Connie - nice to see you!! x:-)-luloo

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