Beautiful Scars Poet Acrostic

For You Are My Great Escape

Gently and softly, you tease me that way-
Resonating chills down my spine lead to
Enchanted fields where we become one.
Attraction becoming an ineffable distraction,
Taking me higher as we make our great escape.

Eternal haven where we can be intimate, 
Soft sentiments of silk seem to shine-
Crepuscular nights of splendor with thee,
Awaiting the touch you crave from me.
Perpetual truth that my affection wears
Ethereal wings (flying to you forever)


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January 8, 2020
Great Escape Poetry Contest
John Hamilton

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Jenish Somadas January 15, 2020 at 11:46 PM Romantic escape..Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem Lu Loo..

Sandra Adams January 15, 2020 at 7:00 PM beautifully romantic Lu Loo... congratulations on your win...:) hugd

Connie Marcum Wong January 15, 2020 at 3:18 PM Congratulations on your romantic acrostic winning second placement Luloo. xxoo

John Hamilton January 15, 2020 at 2:13 PM Crepuscular nights of splendor...well you got me with that line, a wonderful write completely disguising it is an acrostic, just what I was hoping for, congrats and thanks for entering Laura!

Lin Lane January 9, 2020 at 7:27 AM An intimate escape with the one you love sounds like a good idea. Well written, Laura. Beautiful Scars January 9, 2020 at 12:17 PM thank you lovely Lin, nice to hear from you, Happy New Year! x:-)-luloo

Caren Krutsinger January 9, 2020 at 5:22 AM "Taking me higher as we make our great escape." This is where my heart stopped and said "OH!" Beautiful Scars January 9, 2020 at 12:17 PM many thanks caring Caren, (I love nicknames lol) the sweetest are you...x:-)-luloo

Eve Roper January 8, 2020 at 8:33 PM Nicely done, Laura, good luck in the contest.

Connie Marcum Wong January 8, 2020 at 6:37 PM A very beautiful romantic acrostic Luloo. This should become a top winner. xxoo Beautiful Scars January 9, 2020 at 12:16 PM thank you sweet Connie - nice to see you!! x:-)-luloo