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For Within Thine Eyes, I See Love's Eternal Gaze, - a Collaboration With Susan Ashley

For Within Thine Eyes, I See Love's Eternal Gaze, - a collaboration with Susan Ashley How shall I, let your kind and most tender heart go with its immense depths, sweet kisses, resplendent glow. I could do no such, no more than I walk away sweetheart, I love you too much, this truth I dare say. For within thine eyes, I see love's eternal gaze its light penetrating through, world's morbid, dark haze! On your beautiful dear face, an angelic smile its tenderness born from a true soul without guile. I pray thee, ask me not to this truest romance leave condemn me not to darkness, wherein I must grieve. For within thine eyes, I see love's eternal gaze its light penetrating through, world's morbid, dark haze! Know this soul and its salvation came from your heart infinite bliss, desperate plea, that we not part. I beg your safe return from that far distant shore from treasures of our reunion, we part no more! For within thine eyes, I see love's eternal gaze its light penetrating through, world's morbid, dark haze! ...my mind does ever wander the wonders of Spain - to live without you has been my infernal bane... My spirit hangs damp, like Spanish moss in huddles as melancholy raindrops wed rings in puddles, only to vanish like vows we were to exchange the fibers of our oneness now in disarrange. For within thine eyes, you’ve lost love's eternal gaze, Sun’s eclipse penetrates world in morbid, dark haze! Tides of separation swoon under our sad spell and upon your lost-love sword bayonet I fell. Return you not from far distant shore of retreat, this Southern man slayed, myself filleted in defeat. For within thine eyes, you’ve lost love's eternal gaze, Sun’s eclipse penetrates world in morbid, dark haze! This soul knows not its salvation nor your treasure, our reunion is in ruins beyond measure. As my being’s a dank cavern without your light I shiver in painful throes from your guileless smite. For within thine eyes, you’ve lost love's eternal gaze, Sun’s eclipse penetrates world in morbid, dark haze! A Robert J. Lindley and Susan Ashley (collaboration) June 8, 2019 ................................... Poet’s note: Susan, my dear friend, the honor of composing with you is truly cherished and a true blessing to me. That romantic verse is a major theme in our collaborations gives me a break from my dark poetry and gift when working with you to bring a creation to its conclusion and best presentation. As your verses always manage to increase the beauty, depth, romance and imagery in each collaboration we do... You my have my eternal thanks for your great kindness, generosity and pleasure of writing with you!

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Date: 6/13/2019 4:16:00 AM
Your masterpiece is beyond my humble words! It is worthy of many a read, appreciation and honour! Such Beauty adds a lot of Beauty to the ardent reader's soul and spirit.. I thank you both, Robert and Susan for your distinguished endeavours to elevate minds and illuminate hearts.. a precious gem I cherish into my fave list. My deepest regards. Warmest wishes and blessings.
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Date: 6/13/2019 4:11:00 AM
You both, dear Robert and dearest Susan, inspire the heart and enthrall the soul of your ardent reader! We are not merely reading a well crafted poetry.. we are not just reading a work of art.. rather feeling and living every single word, imagery, mood and flair! Shall I put it once again, you spread Love, Hope, Beauty.. You offer the sweetest of tangible dreams.. You create other possibilities of better liveable realms far from ivory and unattainable worlds.. Great souls achieve great works!
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Date: 6/11/2019 8:59:00 AM
This is incredible; you two work well together. Great imagery here.
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Date: 6/9/2019 10:04:00 PM
A masterpiece from two of the most talented writers on the soup. a seamless collaboration, congrats to you both, a mesmerizing treat to the senses!!
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Date: 6/9/2019 1:49:00 PM
Robert and Susan, another romantic gem from your pens. You collaborate so well together. Tom
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Date: 6/9/2019 8:21:00 AM
Kudos to you Robert and Susan for your talents..your epic poems are always so special! Love and romance resonate in every word and every verse..such wonderful flow and rhythm to your ornate creation.
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Date: 6/9/2019 6:12:00 AM
You two must be gods of collaboration. I mean god and goddess, whose light of poetry penetrates through the darkest haze )
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Date: 6/8/2019 9:34:00 PM
Robert, you never fail to inspire my heart and imagination with the artistry of your rich, romantic poetry. It is with a great sense of appreciation and satisfaction that I extend my many heartfelt thanks to you for another extraordinary creative experience. I consider it the highest honor when you invite me to collaborate with you, my dear and wonderful friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/8/2019 9:21:00 PM
The loss of love follows like a dark cloud keeping us from the light we so desperately need to thrive. Your collaboration speaks of the kind of pain that only time helps heal. Beautiful Susan and Robert! : ) xxoo
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