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For Within Thine Eyes, I See Love's Eternal Gaze - a Collaboration With Robert Lindley

How shall I, let your kind and most tender heart go with its immense depths, sweet kisses, resplendent glow. I could do no such, no more than I walk away sweetheart, I love you too much, this truth I dare say. For within thine eyes, I see love's eternal gaze its light penetrating through, world's morbid, dark haze! On your beautiful dear face, an angelic smile its tenderness born from a true soul without guile. I pray thee, ask me not to this truest romance leave condemn me not to darkness, wherein I must grieve. For within thine eyes, I see love's eternal gaze its light penetrating through, world's morbid, dark haze! Know this soul and its salvation came from your heart infinite bliss, desperate plea, that we not part. I beg your safe return from that far distant shore from treasures of our reunion, we part no more! For within thine eyes, I see love's eternal gaze its light penetrating through, world's morbid, dark haze! ...my mind does ever wander the wonders of Spain - to live without you has been my infernal bane... My spirit hangs damp, like Spanish moss in huddles as melancholy raindrops wed rings in puddles, only to vanish like vows we were to exchange the fibers of our oneness now in disarrange. For within thine eyes, you’ve lost love's eternal gaze, Sun’s eclipse penetrates world in morbid, dark haze! Tides of separation swoon under our sad spell and upon your lost-love sword bayonet I fell. Return you not from far distant shore of retreat, this Southern man slayed, myself filleted in defeat. For within thine eyes, you’ve lost love's eternal gaze, Sun’s eclipse penetrates world in morbid, dark haze! This soul knows not its salvation nor your treasure, our reunion is in ruins beyond measure. As my being’s a dank cavern without your light I shiver in painful throes from your guileless smite. For within thine eyes, you’ve lost love's eternal gaze, Sun’s eclipse penetrates world in morbid, dark haze! Robert J. Lindley and Susan Ashley (a collaboration) June 8, 2019 Poet’s note: Robert, you never fail to inspire my heart and imagination with the artistry of your rich, romantic poetry. It is with a great sense of appreciation and satisfaction that I extend my many heartfelt thanks to you for another extraordinary creative experience. I consider it the highest honor when you invite me to collaborate with you, my dear and wonderful friend.

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Date: 7/12/2019 8:20:00 PM
Did Robert post it too? I May have seen it at his page. It's so wonderful to see two poets inspire each other as you both do. So much passion in this!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/19/2019 5:56:00 PM
Yes, Robert posted this passionate collaboration as well, Andrea. Robert’s beautiful poetic talent definitely inspires my muse as if by magic. It is always a joy creating poetry with my wonderful friend. Thank you for your gracious comments, my dear friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 6/13/2019 4:20:00 AM
Your masterpiece is beyond my humble words! It is worthy of many a read, appreciation and honour! Such Beauty adds a lot of Beauty to the ardent reader's soul and spirit.. I thank you both, dear soul sister Susan and Robert, for your distinguished endeavours to elevate minds and illuminate hearts.. a precious gem I cherish into my fave list. My deepest regards. Warmest wishes and blessings.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/14/2019 7:28:00 PM
Thank you for your generous kindness and loving light, my sweet soul sister. Your luminous heart illuminates my page with your sincere and beautiful essence. Robert and I are honored by your fave, as well, dear poetess. Warmest wishes, love and blessings to you always.. ~Susan
Date: 6/13/2019 4:18:00 AM
You both, dearest Susan and Robert, inspire the heart and enthrall the soul of your ardent reader! We are not merely reading a well crafted poetry.. we are not just reading a work of art.. rather feeling and living every single word, imagery, mood and flair! Shall I put it once again, you spread Love, Hope, Beauty.. You offer the sweetest of tangible dreams.. You create other possibilities of better liveable realms far from ivory and unattainable worlds.. Great souls achieve great works!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/14/2019 7:23:00 PM
Dearest Besma, your precious appreciation is a shining gift that both Robert and I treasure. To know that you feel the mood and emotion of our poetic piece is truly inspiring and moves me deeply, my lovely friend. How fortunate and blessed are we to have the beauty of your heart gracing our charmed hearts and poetry. Your comments are receive with elation and I'm so pleased you enjoyed our collaboration. Robert's gracious invitation led the way to our expressive poem and I humbly followed in the light of Robert's brilliant inspiration...
Date: 6/11/2019 8:54:00 AM
Inspiring! Very romantic; great imagery in there. Enjoyed the read; you work well together.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/11/2019 6:58:00 PM
I relish your uplifting comments, M. L.. Your heartwarming words are a delight to receive. I'm so pleased you enjoy our collaboration, Robert's golden muse is abundantly inspiring. I am honored to follow in his poetic light. Warmest wishes always, my talented friend.. ~Susan
Date: 6/10/2019 11:12:00 AM
Beautiful verse dear a great collaboration from both of you.. Hugs Eve
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/11/2019 6:54:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. It is a joy to hear from you and receive your lovely comments. It is always the highest honor to collaborate with my dear friend, Robert, whose beautiful muse knows no bounds.Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 6/10/2019 9:11:00 AM
Another gem from the dynamic duo that always seems to create masterful magical poetry. So wonderful that you two collaborate together... Warmest wishes to both of you, Susan and Robert...Charlie
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/11/2019 7:01:00 PM
Charlie, your wonderful and heartwarming comments are received with smiling joy. It is always the highest honor to collaborate with my dear friend, Robert, whose beautiful and inspiring muse knows no bounds. I'm so happy you enjoyed our poem. Warmest wishes always, my ever so charming friend.. ~Susan
Date: 6/9/2019 10:06:00 PM
This is a masterpiece written by two of the most talented writers on the soup! A seamless collaboration, an instant classic write, congrats to you both!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/11/2019 6:49:00 PM
My dear friend, Charlie, you are as exceedingly kind and talented as you are charming.. :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/11/2019 6:47:00 PM
Thank you, John, your generous appreciation of our poem touches my heart. It is amazing to be among so many truly talented writers on Soup.. which, you my dear friend John, rank right up there with the best! I'm fortunate to be able to collaborate with Robert, who as you said, is one of the best writers here as well. The accolades go to his inspiring muse who sets the romantic tone for our many co-writes. Warmest wishes always, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/10/2019 9:08:00 AM
I agree with your every word, John.
Date: 6/9/2019 9:12:00 AM
My dear friend, your kindness and immense poetic talent both awe me. A great gift every time you honor me by writing with me on a new creation. And so oft, I am so inspired by our composing together that I am able to write other poems during our time composing. God bless you always dear friend.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/11/2019 7:06:00 PM
Thank you for the elation of your generous comments, dear Robert. Your gracious invitation and radiant inspiration led the way to our expressive poem and I humbly followed in the light cast by your golden verses. Thank you for your inspiring friendship and poetry you so generously share with me. Warmest wishes always, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Date: 6/9/2019 8:20:00 AM
Love and romance resonate in every word and every verse..such wonderful flow and rhythm to your ornate creation. Kudos to you Susan and Robert for your talents..your epic poems are always so special!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/11/2019 6:57:00 PM
I relish your uplifting comments, Vijay. Your heartwarming words are a delight to receive. I'm so pleased you enjoy our collaboration, Robert's golden muse is abundantly inspiring. I am honored to follow in his poetic light. Warmest wishes always, my talented friend.. ~Susan
Date: 6/9/2019 5:26:00 AM
Brilliant collaboration, Susan. The true poetry like you and Robert live under Almighty God of Poetry and under His eternal gaze)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/9/2019 9:02:00 PM
Kurt, your esteemed comments are treasured. Thank you for your uplifting and beautiful thoughts. As you know, Robert's immense talent and inspiration makes a collaboration a joy to engage in. Robert's muse lit our poetic path in this piece and I humble followed in his gracious light. Warmest wishes always, dear poet.. ~Susan
Date: 6/9/2019 12:14:00 AM
My dear Susan, the two of you are an amazing team.. This write literally took my breath away!! So glorious.. I enjoyed this masterpiece!! Many blessings..
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/9/2019 8:58:00 PM
Your wonderful comments are received with joy, Robertina. It is always the highest honor to collaborate with my dear friend, Robert, whose beautiful muse knows no bounds. I'm so happy you enjoyed our poem. Warmest wishes always, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Date: 6/8/2019 10:10:00 PM
You two write magic together Susan. This is exquisite and beautifully expresses how the loss of love can devastate. Brava! : ) xxoo
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/9/2019 8:55:00 PM
Thank you, your insightful comments reflect the spirit of our poem beautifully, Connie. I'm so pleased you enjoy our collaboration, Robert's golden muse is ever and abundantly inspiring. I am honored to follow in his poetic light. Warmest wishes my lovely friend.. ~Susan

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